TEAM DRAGON Comment Porn!!!
You know you're one of the best things that ever happened to me--as a beta, and fellow Snarry writer, and as a friend. One of the things I like best about your stories are that your Snape is snarky. Might have a soft layer somewhere, but on the exterior, he's Snape, through and through.
We see a lot of things the same way--canon compliance, the epilogue, etc, And OH WOW on the little elves doing stuff to your files while you sleep--I think we may've infected each other.
I'm looking forward to reading your Games fic all in one go--it's going to be awesome, as usual. GO TEAM!!!
And now, some first-time virgin!Harry COMMMENT Pr0N:
"I'm losing patience with you!" Snape said as he stalked around the desk.
"I have enough for both of us." Harry leant back in his chair and stretched his legs out.
"So arrogant. I supposed I shouldn't be surprised that the Chosen one would spread his legs for every Tom, Dick, or…never mind."
Harry blinked at him. "What're you on about? I've not spread them for anyone…ever. You'll be the first," he said as he casually undid his flies, watching Snape's eyes go wide and his sallow cheeks pinken.
"You can't be serious," Snape said hoarsely.
Harry smiled enigmatically then stood, letting his trousers fall to the floor as he began to unbutton his shirt.
Snape couldn't help himself. He reached out and pulled Harry sharply to him. "Why?" he muttered at Harry's lips, then gasped when he felt the nimble fingers slip inside his robes.
"Because you're a snarky bastard, and I've been hot for you for years. You're not about to tell me I've been saving myself for nothing, are you?" Harry murmured huskily, feeling suddenly weak in his knees when his hand finally met the hot flesh of Snape's belly.
In a flash, Snape rotated them both, using the force of his body to lean Harry over the desk. His hand found Harry's cock and squeezed hard, earning him a gasp of surprise, as he used the other to move the hair from Harry's ear, where he muttered, "Of course not, I'll make it worth your while, I promise."
"You won't be sorry," Harry panted, as he felt Snape's finger breach his arse.
"No, but you may be…there will be screaming," he promised as he kicked Harry's legs apart, then smiled when Harry let out the first howl.