yes, you're right about the emphasis being on his eyes. that scene was very interesting, and i think that severus needs a bit more work before he'll see harry for who he really is. and harry has to grow up a bit more before he can really forgive snape for the way he treated him in the past (and that little thing... oh yeah XD killing dumbledore!). which makes writing them after that encounter really fun and interesting!
i'm happy to hear that you think my fic is promising- i'm stalling a bit and trying so hard to get back on track ^^;