This is excellent! Composition and positioning are awesome, very well done imo. It's very stark and reduced which heightens the impact. Though at the same time one feels a bit detached from the scene. As if viewing a photograph from a warzone or a crime: where it's clear the professional immortalizing the scene is doing so from an objective point of view, as a chronist, not as someone involved.
Something bugged me about the look of this (not in a negative way!) until I scrolled upwards again and read the Filter- and photography A/N and now it makes sense ^_^ It simply didn't give me the vibe of "drawing".