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prayer_at_night ([info]prayer_at_night) wrote in [info]snarry100,
@ 2009-05-28 19:12:00

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Current mood: bouncy
Current music:Mike Oldfield - Tubular Bells
Entry tags:challenge 163: the great outdoors, prayer_at_night

The Great Outdoors
Title: "The Great Outdoors" (Very imaginative, isn't it? *drop*)
Author: prayer_at_night
Word Count: 100
Rating(s): What is the lowest rating?
Challenge: ...I'm repeating myself: The Great Outdoors
Warning(s): fluff; unbetaed!>.<°
A/N: Is it all right for me to post now? I know there is a new challenge now, but I was searching for a beta reader and then the time ran out and... forgive me??? *puppy eyes*



The black-haired toddler ran around the garden in circles, yelling and swinging a stick.
Frowning, Severus looked up from his book.
“What exactly is he doing there?” He asked Harry, who smiled fondly.
“Vanquishing some monsters, I guess. Defending his kingdom.”
Severus shook his head, affection curling the corners of his mouth.
Much later, the boy lay spread-eagled in the moonlit grass, snoring softly.
Severus gathered the sleeping child in his arms and whispered: “Seems as if even the king of The Great Outdoors must succumb to sleep, hn?”
Teddy just suckled his thumb and wriggled closer to Severus’ chest.



Please tell me if there are mistakes! I'm not a native speaker, so there might be some...v_v°



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[info]alisanne
2009-05-28 12:29 pm UTC (link)
Awww! *melts*
That's absolutely adorable! *cuddles drabble*
Very sweet.

Welcome to Snarry100! :)

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-05-28 12:32 pm UTC (link)
I'm so glad you like it!!! *cuddles you*

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[info]alisanne
2009-05-28 12:30 pm UTC (link)
Oh, and I added a name tag for you. :)

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-05-28 12:32 pm UTC (link)
Cooooool!8D

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[info]lilyseyes
2009-05-28 02:21 pm UTC (link)
Very cute!

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-05-28 02:23 pm UTC (link)
Aw, thanks!^.^

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[info]majmunka
2009-05-28 02:35 pm UTC (link)
So cute! Black hair, indeed... Seems that affection is mutual :D

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-05-28 03:50 pm UTC (link)
Most definitely!^^
Thank you!:-*

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[info]drachenmina
2009-05-28 05:13 pm UTC (link)
Oh, that's so sweet! :D

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-05-29 02:05 pm UTC (link)
Glad you think so.^-^
Thanks!:-*

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[info]snapessecret
2009-05-28 05:25 pm UTC (link)
That is just awwwww, so lovely.

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-05-29 02:07 pm UTC (link)
>///< Oh, thank you!:-*

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[info]shadowess
2009-05-28 07:59 pm UTC (link)
ah how cute, welcome to snarry100

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-05-29 02:09 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!:-*
So glad you like it.^^

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[info]torino10154
2009-05-28 09:10 pm UTC (link)
Adorable. Great job.

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-05-29 02:09 pm UTC (link)
Awww, thank you so much!:-*

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[info]bridgetmkennitt
2009-05-29 03:43 am UTC (link)
This was quite adorable. <3

I do suggest that, for easier reading on the eyes, to have a space in between each paragraph like what I did in my comment. Other than that, this is a fun drabble to read!

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-05-29 02:13 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! Both for the "adorable" (what a nice word! *bounces*) and the advice; I'll do that from now on.^^

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[info]fancypantsdylan
2009-05-29 04:41 am UTC (link)
ah that was so sweet

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-05-29 02:14 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!^///^

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[info]hambares
2009-05-29 11:08 pm UTC (link)
Awww! Huggles Teddy!

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-05-30 03:36 pm UTC (link)
Hee, little boys are so sweet, aren't they.^^

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