Sorry to be commenting so late - was unfortunately tied up in work for a while & didn't get a chance to give this the attention it deserves.
Anyway, this is such a great piece and so exactly what I wanted! I love the way their relationship develops, and how they both really stay in character throughout, and all the plottiness. I also enjoyed their snarky conversations, and the way they both seem to grow emotionally - you show very convincingly how they can be good for each other. Thank you so much and I'm so glad I finally got to sit down and read it, it really made my day!