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Wow, I really liked that, especially the way you subtly included and sometimes twisted so many lines from canon:
"See? You don't even deny it."
"My sight is as good as it ever was,"
"I'm sorry."
"I guess you've chosen your way--and mine.
Lily... gone... "Dad?"
It makes me ill, too, to think of Lily marrying him out of guilt or pity, rather than because she truly loved him. It's probably a sad-but-true idea, though. The canon characters would not probably have been compatible with one another, in the end. (Still, we can dream, can't we?)
I like perceptive Al who apparently doesn't let on about what he knows, too. (Is "Al" still Albus Severus? *chuckles*)
"See? You don't even deny it."
"My sight is as good as it ever was,"
"I'm sorry."
"I guess you've chosen your way--and mine.
Lily... gone... "Dad?"
It makes me ill, too, to think of Lily marrying him out of guilt or pity, rather than because she truly loved him. It's probably a sad-but-true idea, though. The canon characters would not probably have been compatible with one another, in the end. (Still, we can dream, can't we?)
I like perceptive Al who apparently doesn't let on about what he knows, too. (Is "Al" still Albus Severus? *chuckles*)