Wow, what an awesome review! I'm sorry I'm so late in response, but I wanted to say that I've read your note a few times and I'm dead chuffed. This story is not my usual style, and while it was a challenge, I'm glad that the light layers of it came across so well.
I felt so bad for Harry as well; he originally wasn't going to be so lost but it just had to be done.
As for the sex, I'm all about equal opportunity and bottom!Snape is hot! I'm also not a fan of flowery eroticism, so I try to avoid it like the plague.