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spfestmod (spfestmod) wrote in snape_potter,
@ 2011-10-10 11:51:00

Entry tags:

cliche fest, fic, rating: r

Cliché Fest: FIC: A Pointed Revelation
Title: A Pointed Revelation
Authors: cruisedirector and dementordelta
Rating: R
Word count: ~13,000
Content/Warning(s): (highlight for spoilers) *Teacher/student relationship. Non-explicit mentions of Ron/Hermione. Everyone is over 18.*
Cliché: (highlight for spoilers) *Snape's Patronus turns into Harry's!*
Spoilers: Through Deathly Hallows minus epilogue.
Summary: Harry can't become an Auror unless he can master non-verbal spells.
A/N: Thanks to Isi for beta. Written for snape_potter's Cliche Fest.

(A Pointed Revelation)

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	abrae 2011-10-10 06:50 pm UTC (link)
	Lovely! The interplay between the Patronuses is especially charming. :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation dementordelta 2011-11-30 04:09 am UTC (link)
	Thanks so much, they do need a good frolic! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	suitesamba 2011-10-10 07:28 pm UTC (link)
	Great lunchtime reading--your story was interesting, engaging, funny and rather sweet all at the same time. I loved Severus denying that his Patronus had changed. It reminded me of a Monty Python skit! Thanks for sharing. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation dementordelta 2011-11-30 04:13 am UTC (link)
	giggles Thanks, Snarry as Monty Python works for me! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	lost_stray_cat 2011-10-10 07:36 pm UTC (link)
	I loved their foreplay, it had such a sense of intimacy. Knowing what we did about Snape's feelings, that whole thing just felt so emotionally charged and wonderful. Also I loved Draco, I wanted to protect him from Ron! :-) Oh and one more thing to note, I wanted to see Snape teaching at a Wizarding University for so long... :-) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation dementordelta 2011-11-30 04:15 am UTC (link)
	Heee, there should definitely be more Wizarding University fics! Thanks so much! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	sra_danvers 2011-10-10 08:43 pm UTC (link)
	I loved the story at first, but Oh! when they were together! Snape was especially tender and sexy, being so IC. And Harry talking sex was so cute and charming! Thanks very much for this! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation dementordelta 2011-11-30 04:17 am UTC (link)
	smooches So glad you liked it, sweetie! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	gingertart50 2011-10-10 10:39 pm UTC (link)
	Lovely! I loved your wary, prickly Snape and typically Gryffindor Harry, the interactions between them were wonderful. Really enjoyed this fic! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation dementordelta 2011-11-30 04:20 am UTC (link)
	Thank you so much! Prickly Snape is so much fun! (Reply to this) (Parent)

emynn
2011-10-11 12:09 am UTC (link)

THIS is why I was so excited for the cliche fest. This had the feel of "old school Snarry" to it, but with a fresh twist. I love that you managed to find a way to still have Snape be Harry's teacher, even after he left Hogwarts. Ron and Draco's interactions were brilliant, and I laughed out loud at Ron lamenting his fate as an ice cream vendor. The UST while Snape was training Harry made me remember why I fell in love with the pairing in the first place. But my favorite line is without a doubt ""It's not the quantity of the times he looks at you, mate, it's how much he puts into it when he does."" *melts* THAT is Snarry. And that it was Ron who noticed it made my day. Wonderful, wonderful work. I'll be re-reading this many-a-time.

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	Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation dementordelta 2011-11-30 04:22 am UTC (link)
	blushes Thanks so much! We're both fans of the 'old school' Snarry. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	shadownitewolf 2011-10-11 01:27 am UTC (link)
	Ohhh! I love this! Harry sure is sneaky! Getting Severus with his Patronuses snickers (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation dementordelta 2011-11-30 04:22 am UTC (link)
	giggles Thanks so much! We do love a bit of Sneaky Harry! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	ex_lilyseyes671 2011-10-11 07:10 am UTC (link)
	A delightful tale! I love how Harry had matured and his one-minded focus on things, especially Snape! This was wonderful written, sexy and sweet! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation dementordelta 2011-11-30 04:25 am UTC (link)
	Thank you so much! Harry knows exactly what he wants! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	torino10154 2011-10-11 11:53 am UTC (link)
	Oh that was lovely! I always enjoy a good Patronus story for one, also Severus teaching and Harry actually learning. :D Ron was fantastic first with his career options giggles then being the one that noticed Severus was keeping an eye on Harry. Great job! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation dementordelta 2011-11-30 04:27 am UTC (link)
	Thanks, hon! This was one Cliche that was perfectly fun to write! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	eriador117 2011-10-11 12:17 pm UTC (link)
	This was wonderful, such a good twist on the old cliches :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation dementordelta 2011-11-30 04:29 am UTC (link)
	happy sigh Thanks so much! The classic cliches are just so much fun! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	alisanne 2011-10-11 09:56 pm UTC (link)
	Ahahahahaha! Utterly delightful! I loved everything about this, from the Ron and Hermione banter and the Draco/Ron interaction to Severus' secret longing for Harry and Harry's slow realization. (And how much do I love that it was RON who told Harry that Severus wanted him!). And the sex... Mmmm. Delicious. Fabulous job! g (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation dementordelta 2011-11-30 04:34 am UTC (link)
	smooches Thanks so much, hon! So much fun! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	bk7brokemybrain 2011-10-11 11:30 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, nummy! Lovely bit of getting over their history and insecurities. And YUMMY 69 action, homygawd. Very hot, very tender. Very interesting interactions with the secondaries, too, like Ron/Hermione and lovely Draco. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation dementordelta 2011-11-30 04:35 am UTC (link)
	giggles Thanks, we had so much fun with the smexin'! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	atypicalsnowman 2011-10-13 07:05 pm UTC (link)
	This was wonderful! I love all of Severus' little declarations. How he only taught the class because he knew Harry would be there, how he helped him from the start. How he was almost bashful. sighs Just perfect. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation dementordelta 2011-11-30 04:35 am UTC (link)
	Thanks so much! Snape is just so much fun to play with. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	Re: Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation atypicalsnowman 2011-11-30 04:55 am UTC (link)
	licks your icon (Reply to this) (Parent)

	szefi 2011-10-13 07:38 pm UTC (link)
	This was a lovely story with hot smex - well done! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation dementordelta 2011-11-30 04:36 am UTC (link)
	Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	angela_snape 2011-10-15 02:36 am UTC (link)
	A lovely twist on teacher/student... I really liked this story! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation dementordelta 2011-11-30 04:40 am UTC (link)
	Thanks so much, sweetie! We do love those cliches! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	leela_cat 2011-10-20 12:09 am UTC (link)
	The antlers. LOL. Loved this fic and the way you brought them together. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Cliche Fest Fic: A Pointed Revelation dementordelta 2011-11-30 04:41 am UTC (link)
	giggles Thanks so much! They certainly didn't mind ending up together! (Reply to this) (Parent)