Oh no, I don't want it to end! Ever! :D For me, you could have gone on and on forever with this story. I can't really say what I like most - is it Dimple, who absolutely cracked me up with her dry comments? Or the Malfoys first shouting at and then hugging Severus? Or Al, who is just AWESOME?
I certainly can't decide, but let me tell you: I'm in love with every single characterization, with every fault and quirk of the people in this story. You fleshed them out so wonderfully, I felt like I could walk into the next room and find them sitting there, sipping Arthur's punch. <3
Also, the sex was steaming! I love these "I can't help but want you" things (when they are well written, which certainly is the case here).
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful story! Thank you for writing this! <3