What a fabulous, fabulous tale! Your Harry voice, the relationship you gave him with his kids, with Hermione and even with Ginny was really well done, and I loved your Severus. :) And DIMPLE! *loves* Totally awesome social commentary there. *g* Also, I totally adored the Malfoys! Astoria with her hidden depths (and the fist puno upon seeing Severus), and Lucius actually brought tears to my eyes. As Torino said, everyone was actually three-dimensional! All around great job with this, mystery author. :)