I have to say I really loved this. It's intense and painful and so fraught with emotion but never ever melodramatic. It's reasonably done. While I'm sure everyone's experience is different this felt very real to me. Harry seeming as if he's coming apart at the seams, Severus caring for him but not coddling him. Loved Harry creeping about the house at night, counting his steps towards Severus asleep in his bed. Marvelous work.