Harry is too honorable sometimes, though it works in his favor. He's so naive when they first had sex and he finds Severus' antics to be endearing.
Lucius is totally smitten that he's spouting nonsense. Hermione certainly puts him in his place =)
it's like one master plan. Severus feels guilt and spends five miserable years in Azkaban. He's then freed and gets a very eager and kind husband. What a nice reward!
What I really enjoyed about this story mystery author is the manner in which you wrote the characters thoughts. They were witty and hilarious. Hermione was blunt and bossy with her husband. Severus had the best thoughts "sweet Slytherin's balls I laughed for a while when I read that one (the mental image!!) Harry's nervousness and his way of encouraging Severu's antics. Although, I especially enjoyed Shacklebolt's lines.