This is just absolutely incredible. The scene where Severus is telling Harry about his sex life with Lucius and starts to get specific, and questions him on why is it making him hard since his isn't 'gay', right? OMG that was the hottest scene ever. I love Lucius/Severus so that was a major hot point for it, but there is just something about the idea of Severus Snape talking someone to orgasm that is totally and unequivocally sizzling hot. He is just so nonchalant about it and sexy and... guh! LOVED IT.
The whole fic overall was wonderful. I loved how you had them slowly build up a relationship then take that back to earth. I really wished that Harry hadn't married Ginny the second time but I always did suspect a love potion with all that "chest monster" nonsense.
Really enjoyed this. Have already rec'd it to a list of Snape fans. : ) I had to after I read that super hot scene...