Oh my! *deep and satisfied sigh* What a lovely story! The mix of humor and tenderness and sweetness and sex all with a unique plot (that I wish I'd thought of) and a magnificent reworking of canon makes this into an instant classic. There were so many delightful parts to this that I would end up quoting the entire story if I tried, but I must specifically mention Severus' first drunken, silky seduction of Harry, followed by Harry's sober seduction of Severus, Severus' swooping in to the rescue, the kiss they shared over a sleeping Evander (you gave the kids GREAT names, btw) and Harry's adult friendship with Dumbledore as my special favorites. I shall definitely be reccing this one. Well done!