There's so many thoughts running through my mind right now after reading this. Mysterious Mystery Author you wrote a perfect story. It answers so many questions that I had regarding the seventh book. Especially on the relationship between Harry and Ginny and why it was too quick. It was all due to to a botched up potion. This really makes sense!
Angel Severus! What a sight, and still snarky and morose. And a guest appearance by Dumbledore, who in all purposes in my mind has become the subordinate of Time. Relaying information whether Severus and Harry have shown any progress of getting together.
Time is crafty she figuratively/literally locked them in and made them realize that they belong together and that their lives need to be re-written. I loved the ending when Harry's is so happy of the great life he's leading that he feels like puking. Good thing Severus was there,they could be sick together as they watch the clouds.