OMG OMG!! Seriously. That was so hot. In fact, both of those are hot, but that new fic is the hottest thing I've read in a while. And that's saying something. :)
I love how you didn't take the expected route with Severus and you also didn't change things too drastically. It was really different and also neat to see Severus's memories rewritten like that. Then when they finally start with the sex, I just didn't care anymore as long as they all stayed together, lol! The ending was perfect for me. I really was thrilled all the way through. This is just soooo good. :D