Emotional, descriptive, intense WOW! This kind of writing makes a story wonderful, the kind of thing that is remembered long after a fanfic is read, even when the title will be elusive, the kind of paragraph that will stay in memory when a person is desperately searching for the fanfic it came from, like on snarryficfind, "everybody, please help! I read a story that has [includes description of this paragraph]. Does anyone know where this came from?" =) And all this simply b/c this part of the story is so very, very good.
I am adding this to Memories! :) Thank you for writing this! :)))