The mystery was intriguing and well done, although I have to admit, I got nervous about the grey boy. I figured he was the ghost of Snape trying to seduce Albus or something.... And of course Harry couldn't stay away from Snape once he'd found him again. :) Eeee, ALBUS! *cuddles him* All the kids were well done (I loved how you gave them all such distinct personalities), but Albus was my very favorite. Nice job with this!