- Every reviewer must have nagged about it, but: a person can only be a Parselmouth! Parseltongue's a language! - Also, 'bigger set of rooms', not 'quarters'. You don't say 'bigger set of flats', after all. - Harry acing the shooting range to win Snape a teddy was a kick-ass awesome picture. - Would have liked to see Remus and Hermione's reaction when they found out about HP/SS. - If some class saw Snape and Potter kissing, them being together wouldn't have remained a secret for the remainder of the humanity for another hour, so the school's continued ignorance is very questionable.
The humorous and easy unfolding of the events was most unrealistic, but worked well here, I think, as a matter of style: light, uncomplicated, not-canon and who-cares, and very lovely to read. A light dessert of a fanfic. And the low rating fit well with the overall atmosphere, too.