i have read this very cautiously and have to admit i didn't not dwell on the steamier parts - but then i think there was so much more to your wonderful story!
i loved your descriptions of this alternate universe - part victorian london, part magic universe. the love story between harry and snape was so heartbreaking and sad and beautiful!
ron as streetwise, helpful sidekick and hermione as unconventional society girl could have been out of a dickens novel.
i am full of admiration for all the wonderful details you researched!
snape's fierce love and undying passion for harry kept me reading on and the way you wrote harry's character - part feminised as the type of love story asks for - but then so stubborn, so reckless and until the very end strangely innocent intrigued me a lot!
and of course i have to also express admiration for the sheer amount of words you managed to write in such a short time!