Truly, I love the whole concept of "magic" in the HP world. But my favorite fics are the one's that don't rely on it heavily to boost the story along. These were my favorite versions of Harry and Severus...human and flawed - just like the rest of us. Like torino said, my heart just ached as I read, for what could have been and what they could be together if they could just figure it out! Your Severus is a hoot and a half with his sarcastic thoughts. *g*
As an artist, I LOVED the addition of the map and Harry's postcard. It really did feel like I got to take a holiday right along with Severus. I was literally was holding my breathe right up to the end. It was an amazing story and a FABULOUS read to start the fest with!