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snarryathonmod ([info]snarryathonmod) wrote in [info]snape_potter,
@ 2009-05-01 07:41:00

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Entry tags:fic, rating: nc-17, snarry-a-thon09

Snarry-a-Thon FIC: Coffee
Title: Coffee
Author: [info]crimson_vipera
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 15,104
Warning(s): (highlight for spoilers) *Slight fluff, EWE.*
Prompt: 139 - There is a potion incident and Snape finds himself falling in love with The Boy Who Lived. But all of his other faculties are intact, so he doesn't act on it. Harry still hates him, and Snape needs all of his Slytherin cunning to change this. He finds help from an unexpected source.
Summary: Severus has always preferred tea. Now, though, he finds that coffee also has it’s merits.
A/N: Dear Reader, if you can read this, then I owe a HUGE chocolate Snape to our merciful Mod, [info]accioslash. Let us all hail her greatness. =} Also, I’d like to thank my betas, who were so good to take me on literally last minute: [info]perverse_idyll and [info]whitecotton. They’ve done an enormous amount of work in a very limited time and I’m eternally grateful for it. Any mistakes still there are most likely a result of my stubborn refusal to accept good advise. PS: B., I hope you won’t mind, but I think I’ll stick with professionals from now on. You don’t read slash anyway, don’t you? ;}



Coffee



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[info]eriador117
2009-05-01 09:42 am UTC (link)
Oh, that was brilliant (even though I don't like coffee myself, LOL!)

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 02:05 pm UTC (link)
Thank You so much for the comment.
Personally? I can't stand coffee. =}

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up internet connection at my new place.

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[info]entrenous88
2009-05-01 10:04 am UTC (link)
Very fun and romantic -- I liked portrait!Sirius, Luna, and Neville helping things along.

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 02:06 pm UTC (link)
Thank You for the comment. I'm happy You liked it.

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up internet connection at my new place.

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[info]the_kinky_pet
2009-05-01 12:28 pm UTC (link)

This was so delightful and charming. Fluff in the best sense of the term. I loved Portrait!Sirius and Luna and Severus. And hot sex! And engaging banter. Overall, just lovely.

Thank you!

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 02:08 pm UTC (link)
Thank You for the compliment. I'm glad You liked the banter.

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up internet connection at my new place.

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[info]shadowess
2009-05-01 03:50 pm UTC (link)
wonderful fic! I like the coffee talk "That was some coffee, Potter," he said tiredly. *LOL* and how much to I love bottom-but-on-top!Harry? Too much!!

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 02:11 pm UTC (link)
Thank You. Nice to know You like it.

To tell the truth, bottoming from the top!Harry is something of a kink of mine, lately. It cannot be loved too much.

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up internet connection at my new place.

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[info]jin_fenghuang
2009-05-01 07:12 pm UTC (link)
I love comedies of errors. The misunderstandings were great. Thank you for sharing.

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 02:15 pm UTC (link)
Thank You for the comment.

I love comedies of error too. Shakespeare especially. I doubt there was ever a good one written by someone not inspired by Him.

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]swansong33
2009-05-01 09:28 pm UTC (link)
I loved every bit of this! I could read this over and over. The coffee theme was inspired. I wish I had something more coherent to say to convey how much I loved this. This is going in my favorites for sure. Great job!

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 02:21 pm UTC (link)
Oh... Nothing as a fangirlish babble to squeeze an authors heart with Happiness (with an ornately engraved, animated, capital H). Tank You for the comment.

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]slashpine
2009-05-01 09:45 pm UTC (link)
This was a fun read. It was great to have Sirius back, and he was a fun combination with Luna and Neville.

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 02:25 pm UTC (link)
Thank You for the comment.

I agree. There's seriously too little Sirius in the fiction lately.And pairing him up with Luna... Well, I kind of think that they suit together in a similar way Severus and Harry do.

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]katiebell_0408
2009-05-01 11:34 pm UTC (link)
This was great. The ending was HOT!! Love the banter between them too.

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 02:27 pm UTC (link)
Thank You. So nice to know You liked it.

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]treewishes
2009-05-02 04:04 am UTC (link)
Mmmmm, coffee! This was so much fun -- Luna, Neville, and Sirius - the new OT3? Both Snape and Harry were so in character, yet so much in love -- just perfect. Really well done! ♥

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 02:32 pm UTC (link)
Thank You for the comment.

I must admit I'm slightly, though pleasantly, surprised at how much everyone seems to like LSN.

I'm also glad You think both Harry and Severus are in character. I must admit I've angsted over this SO much. They're impossibly hard to write, those two.

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]snarry_fan7
2009-05-02 04:17 am UTC (link)
Most excellent work! I really like how Severus and Harry interact with each other and how things build up in the story. Well done!~Sophia

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 02:40 pm UTC (link)
Thank You for the praise. Nice to know You liked it.

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]snarry_fan7
2009-06-26 10:02 pm UTC (link)
No problem. Having to go without internet sucks and I'm glad you finally got it working.~Sophia

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[info]winoniel
2009-05-02 07:19 am UTC (link)
How much fun it was to read this story! The idea of Luna, Neville, and Sirius' portrait taking Severus clothes shopping was too hysterical, but sweet as well!

I adored your Harry: incredibly powerful, impassioned, still noble, but ready to carve out his own life.

Severus deciding that he really didn't want to counteract the potion was delightful, and the Unholy Trio convincing Severus to not change his personality was delicious!

Beautiful story, wonderfully written!

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 02:45 pm UTC (link)
Thank You for the comment.

Writting that scene so as not to make it too clished was a challenge.

The Unholy Trio! I like that. =}

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]centaury_squill
2009-05-02 07:57 am UTC (link)
Great fun! The clothes shopping scene was hilarious. So glad Harry and Snape discovered a mutual taste for *coffee*. ;D

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 05:06 pm UTC (link)
Oh... Thank You very much for the comment.

I never did go further with the story in my mind than what I've written (not an oft occurrence), but I rather hope they've found more mutually pleasurable things than just coffee.

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]torino10154
2009-05-02 10:54 am UTC (link)
I love Severus's helpers here! Definitely not the usual suspects. Wonderful development and great ending. I love coffee! *vbg* Great job.

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 05:14 pm UTC (link)
Thank You for the comment. I'm glad You liked it, though to tell the truth, I'm more of a tea person.

Acctually, that's not true. I'm a tea ONLY person... Oh well... =}

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]felaine
2009-05-02 06:18 pm UTC (link)
The Luna and Neville cameos were so enjoyable, just how I see them post-DH.
Love the slow progression between the guys also.
Felaine

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 05:15 pm UTC (link)
Thank You for the comment. So glad You liked it.

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]miepje_neko
2009-05-02 07:35 pm UTC (link)
A wonderful fic. I loved Snape being in love and not really knowing what to do about it. Luna, Neville and Sirius were great as helpers, even if Sirius was gritting his painted teeth *grin* I adored blushing Harry :) And the coffee was very hot!

Loved it! Thanks for sharing :)

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 06:01 pm UTC (link)
Thank You for Your comment.

In my mind, Harry's still blushing at a hundred and fifty. He's just the type.

And as much as I'd want to, I can't take credit for Severus not knowing what to do with the fact that he's in love. That's all in the book.

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]thesewarmstars
2009-05-03 12:18 am UTC (link)
Oh, genius! I adore this. Your Severus is just amazing, and I loved how he put Sirius in his place. Great, great job.

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 07:11 pm UTC (link)
Thank You for commenting.

I've always thought Sirius needed a putting down. I can understand why he acted as he did (post Azkaban), but I never understood why no one tried to reign him in.

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]dreamingjewel
2009-05-03 02:03 pm UTC (link)
Wonderful story!

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 07:11 pm UTC (link)
Thank You. =}

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]lrodell
2009-05-04 03:15 am UTC (link)
Great story, thank you!

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 07:12 pm UTC (link)
No, thank You for reading it. An authors nothing without his readers.

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]zephre
2009-05-05 08:06 pm UTC (link)
fantastic! entertaining and totally plausible AU, with great development of the courtship. :)

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 07:13 pm UTC (link)
Thank You. I'm glad You liked it. =}

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]szefi
2009-05-07 03:50 pm UTC (link)
This was so much fun! Loved the new Trio to bits:)

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 07:14 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad You liked it, and Thank You for commenting.

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]galad222000
2009-05-08 03:23 am UTC (link)
Such a fun story. I really loved it. This is my favorite line: he could condition his lover to recognise his barbs and snipes for what they were — an expression of Severus' less-than-bright outlook on life.

LOL - super fic! CB

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 07:18 pm UTC (link)
Thank You for the comment. I'm so glad You liked it enough to have a favourite line. =}

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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[info]majmunka
2009-05-09 02:21 pm UTC (link)
I'm more of a tea person but this kind of coffee can be addictive even for me :D Hot and delicious. And I love your Luna and her insight.

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[info]crimson_vipera
2009-06-26 07:19 pm UTC (link)
Thank You for the comment.

That's just Luna to you: insightful. Can't not love her.

CV

PS. Pardon me the late response, but I had SERIOUS trouble setting up the Internet connection at my new place.

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