You had me at the only thing Harry had ever heard Lily say about Scorpius Malfoy was "He wears too much eyeliner." AHAAHAHAHAH. That is awesome. And now I think I need eyeliner!Scorpius fic desperately. *G*
I adore your Lily. Hands down. Adore. (And I love that she's a Hufflepuff/Slytherin. :D So much. So very, very much.)
There are a million fantastic, hysterical bits I could quote at you that just made me squee like crazy--the restuarant! Lily's conniving! James and Al being completely unconcerned! The rainbow-inked quill! All so charming and so funny and so brilliantly sweet. \0/