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prayer_at_night (prayer_at_night) wrote in snape100,
@ 2009-05-28 20:19:00

Current mood:

hungry

Spoilt Surprise
Title: Spoilt Surprise
Author: prayer_at_night
Pairing: Severus/Harry
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG-13, perhaps? There is some swearing and the word "semen".
Challenge: Secrets and Lies
Warning: Not beta-read. And the swearing, as I said.^^
A/N: Okay, I was late at snarry100, and I don't know when the next challenge starts here, so I don't wait until I find a beta reader (could take me some time; I definitely don't like to ask strangers to do me a favour.^^°) and just post this now.
Please tell me if there are mistakes! But don't be angry even if the mistakes hurt, I'm not a native speaker! (Yes, that's a damn good excuse.^^)

“You lied to me!” Harry was furious.
“I kept something secret, that’s a difference.”
“I don’t care! You went to your fucking ex-lover and didn’t fucking tell me!”
“Language, Pot-”
“Don’t you ‘Language, Potter.’ me! What the fuck did you want there, anyway?” He demanded to know.
“I needed to retrieve something.”
”What, a semen sample?”
Severus’ eyes narrowed dangerously. “Bastard.”
Only his lightning-fast Seeker reflexes saved the little box from smashing into Harry’s forehead.
There was a ring inside, a golden band with a tiny emerald.
When Harry looked up enquiringly, Severus snorted.
“Without romantic atmosphere, then. Marry me?”

...Comments??? Pleeeaaase!^^

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	alisanne 2009-05-28 01:50 pm UTC (link)
	LMAO! I'd say that's as romantic as Severus gets anyway. ;) Well done! g (Reply to this) (Thread)

	prayer_at_night 2009-05-28 02:26 pm UTC (link)
	You might be right there.^^ Thanks, my dear!:-* (Reply to this) (Parent)

	torino10154 2009-05-28 09:08 pm UTC (link)
	LOL I love this scenario! Fantastic. :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	prayer_at_night 2009-05-29 02:19 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you!!!^^ cuddles (Reply to this) (Parent)

bridgetmkennitt
2009-05-29 03:41 am UTC (link)

Hee, this was lovely! I enjoyed reading this.

I noticed you mentioned that you're not a native speaker and your profile states you're from Germany. There's an active German fandom on IJ with an asylum called

deutschesfandom that's run by

das_dingsi and

mllesatine that you might be interested in. I suggest checking it out, or really, check out the asylums

das_dingsi runs/watches.

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	prayer_at_night 2009-05-29 02:21 pm UTC (link)
	I'm glad you like it.^^ Thank you!:-* And thanks for the info about the German fandom, I'll check that out.^_^ (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	bridgetmkennitt 2009-05-29 03:06 pm UTC (link)
	You're welcome! I have the both of them on my reading list and that's how I'm aware of the German fandom in the first place. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	red_day_dawning 2009-05-29 07:23 am UTC (link)
	That is romance with Severus - well done! If you ever need a quick beta for something short, like a drabble, I'm willing. I'll give you my email address if you're interested. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	prayer_at_night 2009-05-29 02:25 pm UTC (link)
	Hee, thank you! hugs (I'm very much interested! Thank you for offering.^^ ...Could you tell me how you make the letters smaller?^^°) (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	red_day_dawning 2009-05-29 04:11 pm UTC (link)
	My email is zunnix at gmail.com - just email me if you'd like something beta-read. To make the font smaller, just enclose the word "small" in angle brackets <>, like this but without the dashes: <-small->. To end, <-/small->. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	prayer_at_night 2009-05-29 04:22 pm UTC (link)
	I'll do that, thanks!^.^ (Reply to this) (Parent)

	whatthefuckbenj 2009-06-06 01:17 pm UTC (link)
	Aww that's so sweet of Severus! And Harry really tends to be such a bastard sometimes sigh Well done my dear! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	prayer_at_night 2009-06-06 01:22 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you!^^ I'm glad this works for you. And yes, Harry can be a bit of a bastard... But so can Severus.^.~ Thanks again!:-* (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	whatthefuckbenj 2009-06-06 01:28 pm UTC (link)
	You're welcome =) I guess they deserve each other then g (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	prayer_at_night 2009-06-07 02:47 pm UTC (link)
	They most definitely do!;D (Reply to this) (Parent)