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pervy snape-fancier (elethian) wrote in snack_attack,
@ 2009-02-23 13:18:00

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author: esmestrella, severus/sirius

just an untitled overgrown drabble...
This is way off-key from your usual Snack, far too romantic if you ask me. This must be some kind of random AU Sirius who can talk in swirling poetic sentences. Don't blame me, blame him.

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I forget, somehow, that my fingers are still sticky from the drops of honey you have been taking from them with slow and tender licks and sucks; as I, entranced, move to brush your hair from your cheek, I leave a tacky golden fingerprint behind. I smile and softly lick the spot of sweetness from the bone, and you laugh.

Black eyes turn towards grey, new moon and full, your depths absorbing whatever shines from mine. For so I'm told they do, and told I am, shining, a bright new-drawn sword, a white stallion whose coat flashes and ripples in the sunlight, my black mane best India ink against it all.

But though the mane is black indeed (I feel your fingers in it now, stroking, gripping), that's all there is for me: no white coat, but only black; no horse, but rather hound, ever your faithful one, and I will harry and defend in your name, for your love.

Your mouth tastes of the endless labours of the bees.

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	undunoops 2009-02-25 05:09 am UTC (link)
	I haven't been on the Nets/Fandom much lately -- real life intrudes, but then I go on and look at my friends list and this pops out at me, forcing me to log in and acknowledge something beautiful. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	elethian 2009-02-25 01:08 pm UTC (link)
	Oooh, thanks for such a lovely comment! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	bonfoi 2009-06-09 12:58 am UTC (link)
	This what a love letter is...and yes, I've gotten something like this in real life from someone whose spoken English is barely above a twelfth-grade level. I've also written something even more poetic to one of my own lovers. This is gorgeous! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	elethian 2009-06-09 02:20 am UTC (link)
	Oh, thank you! This was a delicious comment to read. You're right, it's a lot like a love letter. To be honest, I'd almost forgotten I'd written this, so re-reading it in the comment notification was a bit of a self-indulgent treat. ^_- (Reply to this) (Parent)