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silara ([info]silara) wrote in [info]shinobi_soldier,
@ 2007-09-06 23:22:00

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Current mood: sleepy

B-day present...
Alright, think of this as a b-day present. But... seeing as it is MY birthday, in about 37 minutes, just think of me as a hobbit...

Anyway, more Zack and Cloud goodness.

Title: Too tired to think of one right now...
Author: [info]silara
Rating: PG to PG-13
Warnings: Violence, though not graphic, um... blood... mild language...
Summary: Unexpected happenings while monster hunting.


It was their first training mission as cadets… and it was turning out to be disastrous.

They had been sent out to small town, called Gongaga; Zack and Cloud had passed through on their way to Midgar and the village reminded them of Konoha, though a bit smaller. A warren of monsters had been ambushing travelers in the jungle, and so they had been sent with a small group of experienced SOLDIERs to eradicate the troublemakers.

Only, it seemed that the monsters were a lot smarter than they had been told, and they were intent on eradicating them.

Now, Zack, Cloud, and few of the other cadets, had been separated from the rest of the group and were surrounded by several of the slavering reptilian monsters. They had managed to hold them off for a while, but even Zack and Cloud, with their chakra enhanced stamina, had been pushed to their limits.

Taking advantage of the temporary lull in the fighting, Cloud wiped the sweat from his face on the back of his sleeve. His arms shook as he tried to lift his sword back up from where it was sagging to the ground. At his back, he could hear Zack cursing fluently under his breath while scanning the surrounding monsters, and on either side, the unconscious, or nearly so, forms of their squad mates were slumped on the jungle floor.

A sudden ominous hissing noise began, the sound they’d come to realize was a precursor to an attack. All of the monsters crouching, hunching their shoulders as they prepared to spring, and Zack and Cloud wearily pulled themselves into a ready defensive position. There was a sort of pattern to their attacks, Cloud recognized as time went on, and if he and Zack got this right, they should be able to kill off the rest of the monsters.

A pair to one side launched themselves at the duo, vicious claws extended and maws wide open, revealing several rows of razor sharp teeth. Cloud swallowed thickly as he brought his sword to bear, Zack also doing the same, and the wet noise of flesh being cut filled the air, along with the stench of fresh blood. Both of the creatures fell, one with a heavily bleeding wound in its chest, the other headless.

Quickly, both boys spun in the other direction, where another pair had just leaped at them, hoping to catch them off guard. A couple of quick swings, and those too hit the dirt. Suddenly, one charged at him from the side and Cloud swiftly tried to bring his sword around to block the attack. He just barely managed to fend the animal off, before a searing pain raced up his leg and he cried out, almost collapsing from the pain. He looked down, only to see a monster, the one with the chest wound from the first round, tearing into his leg.

“Cloud!” Zack called out in worry, hacking into another of creatures, before turning to look. Just in time, to catch sight of another of the monsters about to attack the vulnerable boy. The dark haired boy felt something seize in his chest and time seemed to slow down. Pushing chakra into his legs, he sped to the other boy’s side, savagely slicing through the airborne monster, before hacking the head off the wounded other, causing it to release his friend. Then, almost as though he had some sort of sixth sense, he turned just in time to catch the last beast by the teeth on his sword. The thing gave a rattling growl, angrily shaking its head, trying to tear the sword from the tired boy’s grasp but the two were at a standstill, as Zack could not pull his weapon free.

He felt a hand suddenly grip his arm, almost pulling him off balance as he was used for leverage, and a flash of steel quickly kill the monster. Cloud leaned against him, both panting heavily, an almost giddy feeling overcoming them. Zack bent over and began to laugh, Cloud soon joining in, and their laughter rapidly turned into guffaws so great that tears leaked from their eyes. Cloud’s relief began to fade away when he felt pain as the adrenaline left his system, letting him know that he was still injured. He looked up at his friend, in order to figure out what they were going to do, but stopped as his eyes went wide in astonishment.

“Z-zack!” he stuttered in exclamation, staring hard at the dark-haired boy.

Said boy, who was still chortling lightly, gazed at the blonde with slight confusion. “What is it?”

“Your eyes!” Cloud stated in amazement, bringing one hand up to point.

“What about them?” Zack’s confusion deepened, and it was only when the stunned blonde wiped his blade clean and held it up to the darker boy’s face, allowing him to see his reflection, he was able to see why.

There, staring back at him, was the deep crimson Sharingan, a single tomoe spinning lazily in each eye.

"Shit!"


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I need to go to bed...

Edit: Whoops! Found a typo on the IJ cut link. Fixed it.

Edit the Second: I added a tiny, tiny thing to the end.


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[info]icedark_elf
2007-09-07 06:21 am UTC (link)
*grins* Wheeee! Bloodline pops up finally.

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[info]silara
2007-09-07 12:57 pm UTC (link)
Yes! Though, I'm kinda wondering what mako enhancements would do to the Sharingan...

Thanks for the comment!

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[info]artimusdin
2007-09-10 08:49 pm UTC (link)
... give it extra levels, a la Mangekyou? It makes sense, after all, that since Mako enhances and super-charges the body that it'd also enhance and super-charges the bloodline. That being said, omgyay. *beams* Though now I wonder, will Cloud be uber-fast like the Fourth (though obviously for different reasons)? Cause that would be a fun parallel. =D

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[info]silara
2007-09-11 08:20 pm UTC (link)
But then that begs the question, just what would that extra level do? This hurts my brain, especially since I'm plotting an AU of my AU in which Zack and Cloud stay in Konoha and become ninja instead of leaving... I honestly have NO idea where I'm going with any of these.

If Cloud's fast like the Fourth, he'd probably be super strong as well, because of the mako, a la Tsunade. Scary...

Thanks for the comment!

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[info]artimusdin
2007-09-11 09:37 pm UTC (link)
See, that's the best part. You can make shit up to fit. *grins* You know what's available in canon, so you can mutate/shift that ability for Zack.

And I'd totally read that AU of an AU. But... wouldn't that mean Zack would be killed dead by Itachi? Or would Zack be able to survive Itachi? *ponders* Or would Itachi even do it, with Zack around? .... damn but Zach has bad luck with the genius-types.

...Oh but wouldn't it be? *___* And dude, he'd totally have a fanclub, a la Sasuke. So would Zack, for that matter. And that Sephiroth would is a total given.

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[info]silara
2007-09-11 11:53 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, but then I wouldn't know what to make up, because the Sharingan can pretty much everything already! *whines*

Well... I've thought of both possibilities really. I mean, in the AU of the AU, Zack still leaves the clan (in the process changing his clan name). And, he probably does it early enough that Itachi doesn't even remember him as being Uchiha, seeing as Zack wouldn't flaunt the fact. Whether they meet later and Zack acts as pseudo older brother or not is something I'm debating. Cloud would, of course, be guardian of Naruto.

*laughs* I can totally see Kakashi having a secret crush on Cloud... and Zack trying to fight him off. Aeris would have a bunch of fanboys (OMG! Gai would totally adore her!). Gah!

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[info]artimusdin
2007-09-12 12:02 am UTC (link)
Oh I donno. Entry-level Sharingan means you can copy damned near anything, Mangekyou brings you to a world of the originator's creations, so why not the mako-enhanced one making them unable to get caught in a Genjutsu at all because they can literally see right through it?

Zack would totally act as an older brother. It's practically in his genes.

Hah. Kakashi's crush would be an open secrete, everybody BUT Cloud would know about it. Because Cloud's oblivious like that, and would likely assume that only the girls could/would crush on him. Zack would do everything possible to protect that "innocence". *snickers* And Aerith. Oh god, she'd be such a little perv of a kunoichi. And totally be a medic-nin.

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[info]silara
2007-09-12 12:16 am UTC (link)
Mangekyo has three abilities (though we've only seen two so far: Tsukiyomi(genjutsu) and Amaterasu(the black flame ninjutsu). People have speculated that the last one will be Susano-o). And as Sasuke pointed out during his fight with Deidara, he can see the 'color' of chakra so he pretty much knows when a genjutsu is in use. *sigh* I don't know~...

Yeah, but only if they actually meet. And then the clan doesn't like him for leaving, and they would hate the fact that their 'prodigy' was hanging out with him. Probably try to keep them apart.

You mean like with Hinata and Naruto? I can so see Cloud coming to watch Team 7's training and Kakashi's trying to look responsible, and Team 7's thinking, "What the heck was wrong with him?"

Aerith, Zack and Cloud would be genin teammates, don't you think? With Sephiroth(or maybe Vincent or Cid) as their sensei? And, Aerith being related to the Shodaime and Tsunade somehow? Hmmm...

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[info]artimusdin
2007-09-12 01:16 am UTC (link)
Maybe it just strengthens the eyes then? *shrugs* Hell, maybe the mako counter-acts the degrading of their eyes that happens with mangekyou use?

Who says they could stop Zack? He'd be ANBU material, I have no doubt. So if he and Itachi hung out during their ANBU period, who's gonna stop them?

And on the AU thing, if Zack leaves the Uchihas before Itachi can remember him being an Uchiha, he'd likely have to leave before Itachi was around 3, max. That's when the first memories start forming.

HAH. Sasuke would totally recognize Kakashi's behaviour, as it'd resemble his own fanclub's reaction to him. And it'd be different from Hinata, mainly because Kakashi'd be able to keep his cool for the most part, just get a bit... er, nervous? Jittery? I donno, something, when Cloud's around. ... oh hell, just got to wondering, which reaction would be better. Kakashi meeting Jiraiya or getting to talk with his crush? ... I'd rather think the second, actually, since he likely grew up with Jiraiya, considering who taught him.

Hrm. Genin teammates tend to be in the same school year, though. So unless Aerith and Cloud graduated early, or Zack was somehow stuck at Genin for the two years or so for.. them...

....

.....

*facepalm* And... I'm an idiot. If Cloud is gonna be old enough to adopt Naruto later (which means he's gotta be old enough - and with enough of a reputation - to take on and WIN against the Council Elders), then that means they're graduating during the war with Rock. Which means they were likely shoved out of the Academy ASAP, to kill or be killed. It wouldn't be unheard of for Zack to be the sole survivor of his team, and why wouldn't two recent grads be put with him to get a working team back going? That being said, I can see Sephiroth or Vincent being their jounin instructor. Most likely Sephiroth, because Vincent would be busy being ANBU or a Hunter-nin. *grins*

Aerith would totally be related to the First, given her ability to grow plants anywhere. =D

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[info]silara
2007-09-12 01:42 am UTC (link)
That could work... but then who would Zack kill to get it? He's not the 'kill your best friend' type.

That's why I said they'd try to stop Zack. Doesn't necessarily mean they'll succeed.

I know, and considering he's a few years younger than Kakashi and co., that'd be pretty young. But then again, maybe Itachi and Zack never met when he was still with the clan? (I have memories from when I was three, though it's nothing I'd ever share with anyone.)

*nods* Kakashi doesn't really seem to go crazy around Jiraiya.

Vincent would probably be a better hunter nin. And the Turks= Division of ANBU made for guarding the Daimyo.

*cackles* And I know just who Zack's previous teammates were...

I wanna draw ninja!Zack, Cloud and Aeris now... damn it.

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[info]artimusdin
2007-09-12 01:57 am UTC (link)
Maybe it's not necessary for Zack to physically kill them himself, but to perhaps feel as if he did? Like, say, said friend dies protecting him and thus he feels he's at fault for the death?

Heee. Because nothing can stop the Zack. He is a force of nature. *nods wisely*

Hrm, I can see Itachi and Zack not meeting for a while, considering how large the Uchiha clan likely is/was. So that'd give them a few more years. Especially if Zack were ignored by the rest of the clan, due to the fact that he "hasn't manifested the Sharingan". Despite the fact that he, you know, likely has and just hasn't told the clan that.

Yeah. Likely got used to being around a Legendary Sanin due to his Sensei being the personal student of said Sanin.

Heh. I always pictured Turks as being the equivalent of the hunter-nin, while Soldier would equate to ANBU. *grins*

.... oh? *perks up*

... Don't tempt me. Really. Please? *whimper*

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[info]silara
2007-09-12 02:11 am UTC (link)
Maybe mako can activate the mangekyou without the death?

*nods* He is indeed.

Zack's former teammates... are a surprise! I've got a little drabble in mind and I'm going to try and write it tonight, and that should tell you who they were.

I've actually had ninja!Zack and Cloud on my brain for a few days, I just added Aerith. I need to write my idea down first before I get to that though.

P.S.: No, I'm afraid I don't have AIM. I have a Y!Messenger, but that's it.

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[info]artimusdin
2007-09-12 02:22 am UTC (link)
Hrm. Yeah, activate it and prevent it from blinding the user?

Heee! New stuff! *glees like a gleeing thing*

*giggles* I can't wait. Medic-nin!Aerith fills me with glee.

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[info]silara
2007-09-12 02:45 am UTC (link)
I was just thinking about how their team is like a quasi Team 7. Silver-haired sensei, green-eyed medic who wears pink/red, blonde Namikaze, and an Uchiha with spiky hair...

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[info]artimusdin
2007-09-12 02:47 am UTC (link)
.... oh god. *amused* And instead of the Namikaze being the hyper and loud one, it's the Uchiha. Instead of the Uchiha being the quiet, angsty one, it's the Namikaze. I... laugh so hard.

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[info]silara
2007-09-12 02:50 am UTC (link)
*nods and laughs* And instead of the sensei being a lazy pervert, he's a workaholic hell bent on propriety. Though, the girls are pretty similar, though Aerith is more open about her pervertedness.

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[info]artimusdin
2007-09-12 02:55 am UTC (link)
More open? She doesn't even attempt to hide it! She'd be constantly attempting to get Cloud in a dress "for the sake of the mission!" And Zack would help. Not to mention she'd try to get "her boys" to get it on for her viewing enjoyment. And again, Zack would be all for that, perv he is. *grins*

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[info]icedark_elf
2007-09-12 02:56 am UTC (link)
Just so you know, I hate you both. *nods and wanders off*

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[info]artimusdin
2007-09-12 02:59 am UTC (link)
*cracks up* Awww. Are we increasing your bunny count again?

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[info]silara
2007-09-12 03:02 am UTC (link)
*laughs* I was wondering if anybody else was keeping track of this! Though I suppose you might not have a choice...

*spread bunnies* Whee!

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[info]icedark_elf
2007-09-12 04:02 am UTC (link)
Art keeps tossing me links. *grins* Not my post, so I don't get all the comments.

Evil bunny brats.

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[info]silara
2007-09-12 04:10 am UTC (link)
*laughs* I see... she trying to get you in on the fun?

Two pages of the new ficlet done... just a little more...

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[info]silara
2007-09-12 03:00 am UTC (link)
I was just thinking about such a crossdressing!Cloud mission! *cackles*

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[info]artimusdin
2007-09-12 03:02 am UTC (link)
Because crossdressing!Cloud is full of win. *glees* Cloud would totally sulk over it, too. *snickers*

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[info]silara
2007-09-12 03:07 am UTC (link)
Zack: "Awww! Come on, Spike! Don't look so gloomy!"

Aerith: "Oh! You look so cute~!"

Sephiroth: *tries to hide his smirk* "Now remember, Cloud, get the scroll before you leave."

Cloud, wearing a wig and kimono: *glares fiery death*

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[info]artimusdin
2007-09-12 03:12 am UTC (link)
Though I think he'd make a very passionate (albeit futile) argument about how Aerith should be the one to do this, seeing as how she's the girl and not him. Poor boy.

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[info]silara
2007-09-12 04:44 am UTC (link)
The ficlet is up! *glee!*

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[info]artimusdin
2007-09-12 02:03 am UTC (link)
... PS: Don't suppose you have AOL Instant Messenger?

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[info]alydhe
2007-09-07 08:30 pm UTC (link)
oooh, shiny! I am really looking forward to reading more of this. Though your fic puts mine to shame. -__-;

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[info]silara
2007-09-07 11:03 pm UTC (link)
What? That can't really be true, after all, authors are often their own worst critics. My fic just provides an interesting counterpoint to your own, by showing different interpretations! (Sorry, I'm taking Lit and Theatre History courses right now, along with Philosophy... makes me think strangely.)

Anyway, thanks for the comment! I hope I get a chance to read yours!

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[info]pegunicent
2007-09-09 06:42 pm UTC (link)
Oh yes, shit Zack. Because of all the things you don't want normal people to see, that is one, and I'm willing to bet asyou didn't know how to call it, you don't know how to send it *back*. -cackles like a fiend and goes to plot more half naked elite ninjas-

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[info]silara
2007-09-09 06:45 pm UTC (link)
*cackles*

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[info]elanor_pam
2007-09-20 06:00 pm UTC (link)
Ooooh, first time reading this, but OH I LIKE IT.

When's Tifa getting to know them?

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[info]silara
2007-09-20 07:26 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! ^_^

I don't know just yet, because I've pretty much reached my limit on ideas as far as Tifa and Haku are concerned... Well, I do have a few ideas... but I don't think that they are feasible. It'll happen when it happens, I suppose. You wouldn't happen to have any ideas, would you...?

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[info]elanor_pam
2007-09-20 07:41 pm UTC (link)
If Tifa's age corresponds to Cloud's and Haku's age corresponds to Naruto's, then they could meet when in Naruto's mission in wave country, just like in the manga - except it'll be Zabuza alone, and Haku'll be on their side.

Then they could go back to Konoha with them and be trained or something.

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[info]elanor_pam
2007-09-20 07:44 pm UTC (link)
....if Naruto's actually taken back to Konoha. If not... hm, then they could be running from Konoha and into the wave country?

Though, since I tend to think of Konoha as better than Shin-ra, I guess it's a better bet for them to go to Konoha.

If not... you could use that one for the AU.

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[info]silara
2007-09-20 08:10 pm UTC (link)
I did kind of think of that for my 'Konohaverse'. I suppose it'll require a bit more deliberation. In my 'Shinraverse' as it were, I don't imagine them coming for Naruto until after the boy is a pretty good age, as opposed to pegunicent's where they take him when he is young.

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[info]elanor_pam
2007-09-20 08:20 pm UTC (link)
Them = Shin-ra or Konoha ninjas?

Now the timeline is all wonky in my head.

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