THAT is gorgeous. I can't believe you made something so pretty out of this <3.
No worries about the editing of it - thats how I learned to even do these things. Through editing other people's stuff. If I can get someone else as inspired about HTML as RP_Tutorials got me, I'm extremely happy and flattered and satisfied. <3
You might also be interested in this as an alternative. It's got a lot of space for character blurbs. :)