Hello! I liked this too, I definitely learned something and I've been rping for a while. This is a great read for newbie and oldbie alike.
I have a suggestion for something that might be expanded on... challenges? I noticed it was in the Holds description but not concretely defined. Unless I missed it, sorry. XD; It's really late. Kinda hard to define since everyone does them differently, but definitely one of those more intimidating things. I dunno, just a thought! Great job, though. I'm sure I'll be linking to this plenty of times in the future!