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pendulumchanges ([info]pendulumchanges) wrote in [info]qaf_scavenger,
Excellent story Ellen! You hit all the right buttons in such a short piece...

First, you made me laugh out loud:
Where are you?” I sat down on my own bed and leaned back against the pillows.

“My apartment.” I rolled my eyes at that.

“You know, you still suck at phone sex,” I said, trying to keep the exasperation out of my voice. “You’re supposed to set the scene. Tell me that you’re naked and panting on the bed, waiting for me to get you off.”

“I’m naked and panting on the bed, waiting for you to get me off.” Little shit. I didn’t dignify that with a response.


Then you got my heart to ache for them:
My eyes are closed so that when you talk to me, I can’t see that you’re not here.

Then you followed it up with some really hot hot HOT phone sex. I couldn't ask for anything more!


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