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Season Five AU Drabble Series, Update [Oct. 20th, 2007|05:54 pm]
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This is an update to my Season 5 AU drabble series, which begins here. It is about my meta that Brian and Justin only break up when Justin can't have pets. A cat in S2, and a puppy in S5. It's canon.

Here are the next three parts.

The Moment Before
By Rebel

Justin stood in the shower, washing away the smell of sex, booze, smoke, and men. Brian had gotten out a minute before, and was toweling his hair roughly.

Justin turned off the water, got out, and took the towel Brian handed him. “So, Babylon is a huge success, just like I said it would be.”

Brian took the towel and started drying Justin’s hair. “How did you like the VIP room?”

Justin grinned. “It was… fun.”

Brian smiled, kissed Justin’s still-damp hair, and tossed the towel on the counter. “Let’s go to bed.”

Justin bit his lip, and followed him.

The Moment
By Rebel

Brian was sprawled across Justin, almost asleep, when Justin sighed.

Brian contemplated ignoring it, but sometimes it was easier to talk to a freshly-fucked, half-asleep Justin than a wide-awake, fully-clothed Justin.

He lifted his head and an eyebrow.

“I was thinking about that puppy…”

Brian put his head back down. “We’ve had this discussion.”

Which was clearly the wrong thing to say, because Justin pushed him off and got out of bed.

Brian sat up. “Where are you storming off to? You live here.”

Justin yanked his sweater over his head. “I know.” And he walked out of the bedroom.

The Moment After
By Rebel

Brian didn’t follow him. Justin didn’t expect him to.

Justin sat on the front stairs. Only a few cars drove down the dark street. He didn’t think about anything, really. He just sat there.

Brian was lying in bed, staring at the ceiling, wishing he wasn’t thinking at all, instead of thinking too much. Thinking how every time Justin said anything, it was about more than the words themselves. It was about all the things Justin wanted, or might want, or wanted to see if he wanted.

Marriage, Brian thought. And families. Violins, and roses, and picnics.

Picket fences.

Puppies.

Continued here...

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[User Picture]From: [info]happier_bunny
2007-10-21 01:22 am (UTC)

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sobs and sobs...REBEL, you're killing me! FIX THIS PLEASE!
From: [info]buster_cat
2007-10-21 01:39 am (UTC)

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Rebel,

I’m amazed at your wonderful grasp of characterization. This is quite sad, but I have faith that you will make things better.

~Buster
From: [info]plasticine_star
2007-10-21 01:40 am (UTC)

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Brian contemplated ignoring it, but sometimes it was easier to talk to a freshly-fucked, half-asleep Justin than a wide-awake, fully-clothed Justin. Rebel, your insight is amazing.

Oh and Ficha said she agrees with Bunny please fix this! and also sniff! puppies are not the same thing as violins violins are evil!
[User Picture]From: [info]vamphile
2007-10-21 01:59 am (UTC)

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they're gonna get a puppy, right? because puppies fix EVERYTHING...
From: [info]absolutefiction
2008-07-10 05:39 am (UTC)

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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww is that twink! soooo cute!

Phil says hi
[User Picture]From: [info]_alicesprings
2007-10-21 02:00 am (UTC)

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Oh Rebel :(
From: [info]jillapet
2007-10-21 03:04 am (UTC)

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Dear Rebel...

I think that Brian never had the unconditional love that a puppy or kitty offers. Therefore, he is afraid.

I love my momma. She says I make even the worst day good.

This is a very good story!

Yours,

Twiddle Butt Peterson
From: [info]aggie_and_ella
2007-10-21 03:11 am (UTC)

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Dear Rebel,

did your typist cry very much while she typed this story for you? Because we know she's not very keen on angst (our humans teach us all these difficult words...)

You said it's a fix-it story. It's time to fix it, please.

Love.

Aggie and Ella.
[User Picture]From: [info]secretsolitaire
2007-10-21 03:16 am (UTC)

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Oh, Rebel. Things are only getting worse. When will Brian figure out that he ought to get the puppy already??
[User Picture]From: [info]rosy5000
2007-10-21 04:12 am (UTC)

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You said this is a fix-it fic, so I'm trying to not be too sad about Brian upsetting Justin, again.

Hope Brian figures out he's better off dealing with a puppy and keeping Justin than not getting a puppy and losing Justin too.
[User Picture]From: [info]my2cats
2007-10-21 04:35 am (UTC)

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Oh Rebel...

You need to fix this fast.We hate to see our Mommy and Justin sad.

Smokey & Bandit
[User Picture]From: [info]firehead30
2007-10-21 08:20 pm (UTC)

From the purrings of the Tiny White Kitty

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Good Afternoon Rebel, you have made my human sad. She is sighing and muttering things like puppies being the metaphor for the communication gap between Brian and Justin during S5. She is now petting my ears and I just blinked at her. While I enjoy the attention, my human has other things to do than sigh about Brian and Justin. While I respect your brillaint abilities to tell the story of teh love, my human is quite tender and it makes her sad. Kindly fix that.

With deepest respect,

The Tiny White Kitty
From: [info]herefordroad
2007-10-22 09:34 pm (UTC)

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rebel, i have to say...very few things can measure up to a sweet little puppy...certainly not violins, roses, and picnics. brian needs to learn this quickly before justin has a melt down!
From: [info]gmta_nz
2007-12-16 04:17 am (UTC)

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I would love if you updated this story, Rebel.
[User Picture]From: [info]hounded
2007-12-16 04:23 am (UTC)

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Dear gmta_nz,

Thank you for asking me to update my very important story about the puppy that Justin will get. I promise that I will write it very soon. I didn't forget but sometimes kittens are very demanding.

Sincerely,

Rebel
From: [info]absolutefiction
2008-07-10 05:40 am (UTC)

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rebel, you are an amazing writer. i wish you could teach phil to write great stories like these, because i looooooooove stories, just like this one!
From: [info]morgan_is_randy
2008-10-24 05:47 pm (UTC)

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I really like this. It's funny but I love how you tied in the 'real' reasons that give greater emphasis on what Justin wants for the future.
From: [info]colleen2328
2009-01-26 11:55 am (UTC)

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"It was about all the things Justin wanted, or might want, or wanted to see if he wanted."

EXACTLY. You know him so well, Rebel.