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Tweak says, "There Can Be Only One"

jule1122 (jule1122) wrote in qaf_drabbles,
@ 2009-09-30 10:06:00

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author: jule1122, challenge #134: past events

Challenge #134: Past Events
Title: Good Genes
Notes: I know this could use some tinkering, but I have been struggling with this challenge all week, and this came out at exactly 100 words so I'm afraid to mess with it.
Condom: Michael

“We did it! I’m pregnant!”

Brian held the phone away from his ear. Lindsay hadn’t even given him a chance to say hello. He listened to her babble about pregnancy tests and morning sickness and due dates all the while resisting the urge to shout “No.”

He wanted to take it back, but it was too late. Brian knew he was never meant to be a father even if it was in name only, but now he was stuck.

When Lindsay finally paused for breath, he responded the only way he could. “I told Melanie I was the better man.”

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	ahaw9913 2009-09-30 02:34 pm UTC (link)
	I think this is lovely, and cute, and funny! I don't think you SHOULD mess with it! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	jule1122 2009-09-30 09:59 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you so much! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	frantic_quest 2009-09-30 02:54 pm UTC (link)
	Oh I don't know...I think it's perfect as is. I can totally see this as the way it went down. And I can imagine the expression on Brian's face, phone away from his ear, as Lindsay grosses him out talking about "women stuff" points at icon (Reply to this) (Thread)

	jule1122 2009-09-30 10:00 pm UTC (link)
	OMG your icon is perfect! Thank you so much for the feedback. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	fun_demented 2009-09-30 05:24 pm UTC (link)
	Brilliant AS ALWAYS! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	jule1122 2009-09-30 10:00 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	edom 2009-09-30 06:48 pm UTC (link)
	Cute, I can totally imagine that's what Brian was thinking, and saying. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	jule1122 2009-09-30 10:00 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks so much! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	besamislabios 2009-09-30 08:50 pm UTC (link)
	I can picture this perfectly! :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	jule1122 2009-09-30 10:01 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	kari77 2009-09-30 09:11 pm UTC (link)
	Perfect from beginning to end. Sounds like canon to me. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	jule1122 2009-09-30 10:01 pm UTC (link)
	The best compliment:) Thank you so much (Reply to this) (Parent)

	the_minx_17 2009-09-30 09:15 pm UTC (link)
	Hee! I agree with everyone else... this is perfect just the way it is. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	jule1122 2009-09-30 10:02 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you! And I love your icon:) (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	the_minx_17 2009-09-30 10:07 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! It's by brianslave68. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	noteverything 2009-09-30 10:12 pm UTC (link)
	Wow. That response IS Brian Kinney. I love this, Jule!!! (Reply to this)

	secretsolitaire 2009-10-01 12:31 am UTC (link)
	That's Brian to a T. :-) (Reply to this)

	_alicesprings 2009-10-01 09:05 am UTC (link)
	Awesome! Spot-on Brian! (Reply to this)