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ahaw9913 (ahaw9913) wrote in qaf_drabbles,
@ 2009-09-23 19:48:00

Current mood:	anxious
Entry tags:	author: ahaw9913, challenge #133: jealousy

Challenge #133: Jealousy
Title: How Good He Has It
And the condom goes to: Ben

With his chores done, Michael locked the house, dropped off the trash and headed to his new friend Brian's house.

He was excited. Brian's family was going to be there.

Brian had finally told him about them; his sister, his mom who didn't work, and his dad who liked to bowl.

Brian is so lucky. He thought wistfully.

Michael remembered Brian laughing this weird laugh, and calling him pathetic, when he had told Brian he was jealous.

He just doesn't know how good he has it.

Michael pulled his coat tighter and walked faster.

He couldn't wait to meet them.

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	secretsolitaire 2009-09-24 02:28 am UTC (link)
	Ah, he's in for a rude awakening. :-( Nice drabble. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	ahaw9913 2009-09-24 02:59 pm UTC (link)
	Yes, unfortunately he is. Thank you for reading! Glad you liked it! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	fun_demented 2009-09-24 04:29 am UTC (link)
	Well done. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	ahaw9913 2009-09-24 02:59 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you, Darling! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	the_minx_17 2009-09-24 11:26 am UTC (link)
	The rose-colored glasses of youth... Mikey's in for a shock. Nice! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	ahaw9913 2009-09-24 03:04 pm UTC (link)
	The rose-colored glasses of youth Yes, and his innate optimism! I'm so glad you like it, Dear. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	besamislabios 2009-09-24 01:51 pm UTC (link)
	Little did he know. :-( Great one! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	ahaw9913 2009-09-24 03:07 pm UTC (link)
	Little did he know. :-( Exactly!! Thank you! I appreciate you reading, Besa! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	suze_y 2009-09-26 10:28 am UTC (link)
	! I like this! Especially because it is so not the first scenario - nor the hundredth - that comes to mind when I think QAF and "jealousy"! And yet it so perfectly perfect. And then there's how the theme works both ways ... you're subtle like that :) Beautiful. ♥ (Reply to this) (Thread)

	ahaw9913 2009-09-26 02:41 pm UTC (link)
	it is so not the first scenario - nor the hundredth - that comes to mind when I think QAF and "jealousy"! Am I strange, then, that it is for me? Yeah, probably! :D I couldn't get poor soon-to-be-disillusioned!Michael out of my head! Thank you, Sweetheart! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	wavingcat5 2009-11-29 05:34 am UTC (link)
	Wince, ooh, the pain of Michael's ignorance in that moment! I love what's not said in what you do say here. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	ahaw9913 2009-11-29 06:12 am UTC (link)
	Unfortunately, you know Michael's sweet innocent jealousy is shortly doomed to a horrific death! Thank you so much for your kind words! (Reply to this) (Parent)