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ahaw9913 ([info]ahaw9913) wrote in [info]qaf_drabbles,
@ 2009-08-31 12:41:00

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Current mood: sore
Entry tags:author: ahaw9913, challenge #130: season six

Challenge #130: Season Six
Title: Bee Cause of You
Author's Note: This is a story told in a series of five drabbles. Everyone needs to know what an amazing beta and friend [info]suze_y is! I absolutely could not have written this without her! This bit of schmooparific love grew, and grew from a plot bunny planted by [info]maxymama here Request is in the comments . I hope you like it!
And the condoms go to: Ted x 5


"Shit! Brian, that bee stung me!"

Brian turned from the bed he was examining, having decided that the posts, while thick, probably couldn't withstand Justin pulling against them with his full strength.

"Christ, are you allergic to fucking bees, too?"

"Can't remember. My mom’d know. I've never been stung." Justin examined his hand, and swatted at another bee.

"You know, if you didn't insist on looking at old junk, in a barn, in the middle of a fucking field, we wouldn't have to worry about bees."

"They’re not junk, they're antiques, and they’ll be perfect for Britin."

____________________


Justin's hand was starting to hurt, and the bees seemed to have it in for him. "We could come back another day." He said it without conviction, since he was reluctant to cut this trip short. Antique furniture was not Brian's thing, and he hated shopping in places like this. It had taken a particularly spectacular blowjob to convince Brian as it was.

Brian, frowning, confirmed Justin's thoughts. "Fuck that. If you want to do this, do it now. I'm not coming back."

Brian stalked down an aisle of gilded, century-old armoires. Justin turned and walked toward the back.

____________________


Brian was calculating a dining room table's height, while pretending to listen to the merchant explaining its finish, when another salesman ran by, panicked. "Some guy in the back got stung by a bee and he's having trouble breathing. I'm calling an ambulance!"

Recalling Justin's earlier comments about the bees, and how he'd been rubbing his hand, Brian felt his heart stop. Barely breathing himself, Brian bolted for the Corvette. He didn't waste time fumbling for Justin's EpiPen in his messenger bag; instead, he grabbed the one he'd bought himself to keep in the glovebox, and ran to find Justin.

____________________


Brian rounded the corner, short of breath, and took in the scene.

Justin was turning away from some stranger, who was sitting on the ground, when he spotted Brian. "Brian! I need... Hey, good - you have it! This guy's allergic to bees and he forgot his 'Pen!"

Brian's voice shook. "You're okay?"

"I'm fine." Taking the case from Brian, Justin turned it over in his hands and opened it. "This isn't mine. Where'd you get it?" Justin asked, quickly handing the EpiPen to the wheezing stranger.

Brian, biting his lips, said reluctantly, "The 'vette."

"The Corvette? Why would you have...?"

____________________


Neither spoke about the events of the day until they were in bed, for which they still had no frame.

"Where else?"

"Fuck!" Brian should have been expecting this. He reached to the nightstand for the cigarettes he didn't smoke anymore.

"What? I just want to know."

"Around, okay?"

"Where?"

Sighing deeply, Brian pinched the bridge of his nose.

"Pool house. Kinnetik. Babylon."

Brian felt Justin's eyes on his face, pulling the words from him.

"Deb's. Michael's. Daphne's."

Suddenly, Justin was on top of him, kissing him breathless. Thinking he was off the hook, Brian began to relax.

"Since when?"



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[info]suze_y
2009-08-31 06:33 pm UTC (link)
Ah, you've heard it before, and you'll have to hear it again:

AWWWWWwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! :D

♥ you

p.s. And you know how much I love you for your efforts to help Brian quit smoking! We all want him around for a long, long time ;)

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-01 04:37 am UTC (link)
*smackles you*

I feel like we birthed a child!!! :D

We want them both around forever!!!

Thank you again SO much!

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[info]nolyana
2009-08-31 07:49 pm UTC (link)
Oh Brian... You'd do anything to save your Golden Wobbie!!! *clutches him to bosom*

Teh Love!!! xD

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-01 04:39 am UTC (link)
:D

Golden Wobbie!!!

He is, isn't he!!!! I love this!!! :D

Thank you for reading!

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[info]vl_redreign
2009-08-31 08:29 pm UTC (link)
Okay, A+ for originality, humor, shmoop and all around woobie-ness.

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-01 04:43 am UTC (link)
Yay!

So glad you liked it!!!

You would have SO been my favorite teacher!!! :D

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[info]outlander
2009-08-31 09:11 pm UTC (link)
*melts*
snark, giggles and shmoop.
Just what I needed!!!
Thank you!

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-01 04:44 am UTC (link)
So glad I gave you what you need! :D

You are welcome, and thank YOU!

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[info]secretsolitaire
2009-08-31 11:51 pm UTC (link)
Oh, excellent last line!

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-01 04:46 am UTC (link)
Hee!

So glad it worked for you!

Thank you for reading!

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[info]circadia
2009-09-01 05:43 am UTC (link)
AWWWW This made me so so happy. I smiled so big. And I'm still smiling. SO adorable! Thank you for writing this *MWAH*

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-01 03:27 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, Darling!

Making you smile, makes me smile right back!!! :D

I'm thrilled you liked it!

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[info]happier_bunny
2009-09-01 05:29 pm UTC (link)
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww, schmoop is right and it's beyond perfect, it's romantical!Brian. :D

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-01 06:54 pm UTC (link)
it's romantical!Brian.

I KNOW!!! :D

I was writing it when you posted last Friday's Show & Tell, and thought it would fit right in with that theme!!!

Thanks for reading, and I'm thrilled you liked it!

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(Anonymous)
2009-09-02 01:35 am UTC (link)
love it! Especially the last line. There is universal appreciation for Brian getting busted for his woobieness. Thanks!

court1429

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-02 03:29 am UTC (link)
Oh, Thank YOU!

Brian is SUCH a woobie!

Thank you for reading!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-09-07 08:06 pm UTC (link)
This is SO ADORABLE! And still believable... which isn't easy to do! Great job!

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-08 11:43 pm UTC (link)
YAY!!!

You know it makes me squee like the crazy fangirl, you know I am, when you think I get it right!!!

So consider yourself squeed upon!!!! :D

Thank you, Darling!

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