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outlander ([info]outlander) wrote in [info]qaf_drabbles,
@ 2009-01-11 13:09:00

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Entry tags:author: outlander, challenge #98: bubbles

Challenge #98: Bubbles
Title: Stretched Thin
Author: [info]outlander
Notes: Thank you [info]4cupcakes for both being my therapist and looking this over. *head desk*
Condom: Pffft. Of course it goes to Brian.


There is no fucking way I can take any more of this. My skin, my emotions, even my patience are stretched taut. Yet he makes me take it. I hover through another endless pause, straining to remain still. Finally it comes. His tongue spears me one last time in a sharp, almost pin pricking jab. I burst like an iridescent bubble, my orgasm ripped from me with a fierce exhale. The noise I make is too exhausted, too relieved to be called a moan.

I feel, more than hear, his slight chuckle tease across the back of my thigh. Twat.



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[info]dirtylttlescret
2009-01-11 02:35 pm UTC (link)
Oh my goodness. Why haven't you been writing more drabbles? This is incredible! Seriously incredible. Why have you been hiding your talent?

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[info]outlander
2009-01-11 02:38 pm UTC (link)
You are too sweet. This bubble has been floating around me for days. I finally gave up and just had to get it out of my head to keep my sanity.
But, thank you!

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[info]dirtylttlescret
2009-01-11 02:40 pm UTC (link)
Well, I'm not being sweet, I'm being serious. You really ought to write more. Well when you're not dealing with snow and children and exploding cans of diet coke.

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[info]outlander
2009-01-11 02:41 pm UTC (link)
dealing with snow and children and exploding cans of diet coke.
My life is always an adventure isn't it?
ROTF

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-01-11 02:38 pm UTC (link)
LEFT AND RIGHT!

This is really beautiful! Especially this line: My skin, my emotions, even my patience are stretched taut.

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[info]outlander
2009-01-11 02:39 pm UTC (link)
*dies laughing*
Writing this stretched MY patience!
*kisses*

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[info]secretsolitaire
2009-01-11 02:38 pm UTC (link)
GUH!!

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[info]outlander
2009-01-11 02:42 pm UTC (link)
Same for your icon!!!!
*discreetly wipes drool from chin*

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[info]court1429
2009-01-11 02:54 pm UTC (link)
Wow. That was a *really* good drabble. More anytime, please. ;)

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[info]outlander
2009-01-11 03:49 pm UTC (link)
*blushes*
Thank you!

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[info]fun_demented
2009-01-11 03:46 pm UTC (link)
I didn't even notice your use of the word bubble, it fit in so naturally. This is lovely. I like the give-away at the end that this is Brian, being stretched taut.

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[info]outlander
2009-01-11 03:49 pm UTC (link)
I am a sucker for Justin reducing Brian to a puddle of goo. *grin*
Thank you!

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[info]fun_demented
2009-01-11 04:48 pm UTC (link)
You know Justin can't resist the challenge of it and that Brian can't resist the powers of teh B/J sex.

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[info]happier_bunny
2009-01-11 03:54 pm UTC (link)
mmmmmmmmmmmmm, *drools*

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[info]outlander
2009-01-11 04:50 pm UTC (link)
LOL. Drooling is good.

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[info]4cupcakes
2009-01-11 04:23 pm UTC (link)
And it's even hotter with that icon next to it.

Being your therapist is easy when I get to read drabbles like this one!

*smooch*

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[info]outlander
2009-01-11 04:51 pm UTC (link)
It is a pretty one, isn't it?
If I don't make you nuts when I try to do this, it just means you are a freak to.
I love that about you. *kiss*

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[info]4cupcakes
2009-01-11 05:57 pm UTC (link)
I am happy to be at one with you in our freakishness.

I am at your beck and call anytime.



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[info]nerilka24
2009-01-11 04:55 pm UTC (link)
Wow, is there nothing you can't turn your hand to? Amazing :)

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[info]outlander
2009-01-11 10:12 pm UTC (link)
I could make a very very very long list, oh graphics master!!!
but thank you!

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[info]nerilka24
2009-01-12 12:39 am UTC (link)
pffft!!

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[info]bulagirl
2009-01-11 05:34 pm UTC (link)
Wow! This was seriously amazing and hot! You need to write more :)

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[info]outlander
2009-01-11 10:15 pm UTC (link)
Thanks!
And omg, if I could have gotten my icon meme to work, you would have seen the icon you used as my sexy one.
*happy sigh*

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[info]catcayman
2009-01-11 09:49 pm UTC (link)
100 beautiful words. Great writing and imagery! ;D

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[info]outlander
2009-01-11 10:17 pm UTC (link)
gosh thanks. I would like to say it was fun to write, but it more painful. LOL

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[info]noteverything
2009-01-11 09:58 pm UTC (link)
*faints*

My world is upside down. You wrote porn. Hot rimming orgasmic porn at that.





I would refrain from saying, "Told you so," but where's the fun in that?




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[info]outlander
2009-01-11 10:10 pm UTC (link)
Something in the space/time continuum is obviously fucked up.
*snort*
But thank you. Especially for passing on the "I told you so" part.
*dies laughing*

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[info]besamislabios
2009-01-12 05:32 pm UTC (link)
wow, you wrote porn!! I'm so proud ;)

LOVE the last line, it's kind of sweet after all the hotness.

xoxo

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[info]outlander
2009-01-12 11:43 pm UTC (link)
Only Brian could call someone a twat and have it be considered sweet.
LOL.

Yummm...like the sweaty Brian icon.

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[info]jule1122
2009-01-12 06:25 pm UTC (link)
Very hot and I could really feel this!

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[info]outlander
2009-01-12 11:45 pm UTC (link)
Awwww...thank you!

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[info]britin1729
2009-01-14 03:05 pm UTC (link)
That was fucking hot. And the last line was perfect :D

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