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pinkfriction (pinkfriction) wrote in qaf_drabbles,
@ 2008-09-15 00:13:00

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author: aquamarina, challenge #83: toppy justin

Challenge #83: Toppy Justin
Title: Whole
Author: aquamarina
Condom: Brian

When he paints, Justin feels that he is a top. Just for that moment he is in a zone of total control. He pounds his brush onto the canvas. He is a whole person. Creative, orgasmic; giving, giving, giving.

When he is with Brian, Justin feels that he is a bottom. Just for that moment he gives himself over to the sensation. He feels the cock pounding inside him. He is a whole person. Creative, orgasmic; taking, taking, taking.

Justin knows he is neither a top or a bottom. He is both. His twin passions create a whole in him.

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	qafcracked 2008-09-14 06:19 pm UTC (link)
	Shivers This is almost poetic in a sense. I like the repetition, the duality, and the fact that he can be both at the same time. On a side note, I think Brian is an alpha top and Justin is an alpha bottom ;) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	pinkfriction 2008-09-14 06:21 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you! And I agree :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	absolutefiction 2008-09-14 09:34 pm UTC (link)
	dirtylittlesecret, On a side note, I think Brian is an alpha top and Justin is an alpha bottom ;) wow. that is a very keen way of explaining it. i agree! brilliant! aquamarina, this is introspective and well written. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	secretsolitaire 2008-09-14 07:50 pm UTC (link)
	I like this -- very creative use of the prompt. (Reply to this)

	quirks4me 2008-09-14 08:53 pm UTC (link)
	This was great! Original and different perspective on toppy Justin. And shows he's not either, but both. Love it. (Reply to this)

	dancing_serpent 2008-09-15 04:07 am UTC (link)
	I liked this very much! Both sides forming a whole...that pretty much fits my own interpretation of Justin. It only needed your drabble to make it clear to me. Great job! (Reply to this)

	alsonotbad 2009-04-20 10:07 pm UTC (link)
	Wow. Art and Brian are definitely his two passions. This was really great. When he paints, he is definitely in control. And, when he's bottoming, he's not, but there is some level of control in letting another enter your body like that. This was beautifully written. Even though it's only 100 words, it's intensely powerful. (Reply to this)