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Tweak says, "yes yes i will yes"

hounded (hounded) wrote in qaf_drabbles,
@ 2007-09-29 19:18:00

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author: hounded/rebel, author: xie_xie_xie, challenge #32: eating out

Challenge # 32: Eating Out
Title: At the Diner
Author: hounded
Warnings: None
Author's Note: The latest in my post-513 kitten drabble series which begins with Justin Saves a Kitten.
Condom: As long as it's still not something to eat, it goes to Justin.

Brian slid into the booth. He picked up the menu, and raised his eyebrow at Justin. “Why the fuck are you still wearing your coat?”

Justin shrugged. “I’m cold.”

“It’s not even cold enough for a down jacket outside.”

Just then Debbie came up. Justin ordered a cheeseburger. Brian ordered a salad.

Debbie came back a little later with two cheeseburgers. Justin was taking a bite of his burger when he realized Brian was staring at him. “What?”

“You didn’t…”

Justin looked down. Rage’s head was sticking out of the opening in his jacket.

Justin grinned. “Oh. Yeah. I did.”

An alternate version of this drabble is here.

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	vamphile 2007-09-30 03:30 am UTC (link)
	Rebel, you write the boys so well. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	hounded 2007-10-16 06:13 pm UTC (link)
	Dear vamphile, Characterization is very important to ~~xie~~ me. Sincerely, Rebel (Reply to this) (Parent)

	brianslave68 2007-09-30 03:36 am UTC (link)
	Oh Rebel, how I love thee. Morgan (Reply to this) (Thread)

	hounded 2007-10-16 06:13 pm UTC (link)
	Dear Morgan, Thank you so much. I love you too. Sincerely, Rebel (Reply to this) (Parent)

	gmta_nz 2007-09-30 04:38 am UTC (link)
	Justin ordered a cheeseburger. Brian ordered a salad. Debbie came back a little later with two cheeseburgers. Rebel, you write Debbie so well ;) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	hounded 2007-10-16 06:14 pm UTC (link)
	Dear gmta_nz, I like Debbie very much. She understands things. Sincerely, Rebel (Reply to this) (Parent)

	happier_bunny 2007-09-30 04:52 am UTC (link)
	ummm, Rebel, we're going to chalk this up to you not feeling well, but out to eat anywhere BUT the diner. :) Still, anything with Rage the kitten in it owns me. :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	hounded 2007-10-16 06:14 pm UTC (link)
	Dear lawyer bunny, :( Sincerely, Rebel (Reply to this) (Parent)

	secretsolitaire 2007-09-30 04:56 am UTC (link)
	Little Rage just wants to eat out too! ♥ (Reply to this) (Thread)

	hounded 2007-10-16 06:14 pm UTC (link)
	Dear secretsolitaire, It seems so right. Sincerely, Rebel (Reply to this) (Parent)

	my2cats 2007-09-30 05:21 am UTC (link)
	Any story where Rage is able to leave the loft and experience the outside world is fine with us. We love to wonder,but our Mommy never lets us leave the house.(only to see the vet...scary) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	hounded 2007-10-16 06:15 pm UTC (link)
	Dear two cats, I agree, cats should be taken more places but perhaps if they didn't try to run off so much that would be safer. Sincerely, Rebel (Reply to this) (Parent)

	herefordroad 2007-10-07 03:43 am UTC (link)
	rebel, i like both versions of your drabble...as long as rage eats like a king, that's what counts. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	hounded 2007-10-16 06:15 pm UTC (link)
	Dear herefordroad, Rage feels the diner burgers are tastier. Sincerely, Rebel (Reply to this) (Parent)

	fun_demented 2008-12-12 08:14 pm UTC (link)
	Justin is a good human. Brian is too, even if he doesn't always know so. Also, I wish I had a hamburger and a salad. (Reply to this)