It's because it's not well written. I just read the first section and I haven't clue what's going on, which is thoroughly annoying. Some writers confuse suspense for confusion. Suspense is created when we KNOW what's happening and have a strong preference for the way things turn out.

And it doesn't *feel* IC either. Like I said, I don't really understand what is happening. From what I gather though, it's Justin walking out of Daphne's apartment. There's no time in the show's history when Justin walking out on Daphne ever happens, or would ever be of any primary focus if it did.