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jule1122 ([info]jule1122) wrote in [info]qaf_coffeeclub,
@ 2009-05-23 10:38:00

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Yes, More About Drabbles
There have been a few posts about drabbles recently which made me think not about the writing of drabbles, but what function they serve. I’ve come to the conclusion that in a lot of ways drabbles are fandom’s little in jokes. In a different way than “teh love” (which I still don’t get) or Justin’s Magical Heart Shaped Ass Day, drabbles operate on assumptions of knowledge – about the show and the characters.

Drabbles are not for casual fans. I know this from experience. It took me a long time to become interested in drabbles partly because the first drabbles I read were for fandoms where my canon knowledge was rather weak. I thought they might be a good way to get introduced to the dynamics in a few new pairings I was interested in. But that is not the function of a drabble. While we often encourage new writers to try drabbles as a way to start writing, I wouldn’t recommend reading them as a way to try out a fandom.

By necessity, drabbles require a bit of short hand. One hundred words leave little room for explanations or backstory. I read in fandoms where I am not familiar with canon sometimes simply because a fic was recced. Most of the time I can figure out character relationships and histories through context. You can’t do that in a drabble. I mentioned in another post, I like to write drabbles where you are dropped into a moment. If a reader doesn’t already know the characters, what they are to each other, and how they interact, that moment means nothing. Or a drabble can be built from the emotion of a scene from the show where understanding of that emotion might come from a one word reference. [info]noteverything has a favorite drabble of mine that takes place during Stockwell’s GLC appearance. If you don’t know who Marguerite Lopez is or if you’ve never watched that scene, the drabble is basically meaningless.

Someone could read on of my longer fics or one of many longer fics in QAF without ever seeing the show and probably enjoy them despite not getting the subtleties. The same is not true of drabbles, and I think that leads to a more intimate feel. There is a level of trust between reader and writer required. When I’m trimming words in drabbles, the first thing to go are physical descriptions of dialogue. “Brian smirked” “Debbie laughed” “Justin glared” etc. The success of the drabble depends on two things-my ability to write dialogue in character enough that the reader can see what the character is doing without my saying it, and a reader who knows the characters well enough to recognize what they are doing.

There is something magical about reading a drabble and being completely in that moment because I know exactly what they characters look like, sound like, and feel. With only 100 words, a complete story is opened up for me. As an author, nothing makes me happier than knowing I’ve been able to do that for someone. This type of bond between reader and author isn’t unique to drabbles, but essential to a drabble’s impact.

Do you feel that connection when you read a really good drabble? Do you appreciate how only a few tiny details can place you completely in a character’s head? What are some of your favorite drabbles?


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[info]noteverything
2009-05-23 10:16 am UTC (link)
What an extremely important point you've made here about drabbles. So not for the casual fan...you do have to know the characters and their personalities to be able to fully enjoy them.

And yes, when a reader tells me I've "nailed" someone's voice or that the drabble is IC, it means the world to me. And when they say, "I could picture the whole thing" or "This should have/could have been on the show," I am over the moon. To be able to show the Queer as Folk world that's in my head to someone else and have them "get it" is priceless and frankly, it's what keeps me writing them.

I have 26 drabbles from other writers favorited in my memories. Your untitled GLC drabble tops that list, hands down. I still can't read it without tearing up and *feeling* that love between Daphne and Justin *AND* feeling the pain everyone suffered from the bashing.

Another favorite of mine is Tell Me About Ibiza by [info]vamphile. It's graceful and elegant and completely took the prompt, which was to use a series of "spooky" words, to an unexpected place.

[info]frantic_quest, a fairly new drabble writer, was able to take the vacation prompt to an unexpected place in Diversion and that's what made it so memory-worthy for me. Vacation brings happy to mind and we got something way different from that drabble.

For me, that's really a kicker for a drabble. If someone is able to take a prompt or an idea and take it to a really unique place, or to write about something you wouldn't expect from that prompt, I am totally enthralled. That little kick, that punch in the gut, whether angsty or happy or silly, really makes a drabble work for me.

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[info]jule1122
2009-05-23 10:53 am UTC (link)
Both the other drabbles you mentioned are both amazing and great examples of what I'm trying to say. Especially Diversion which plays upon not only the dynamics of how Justin comforts Brian, but also their history with vacations. Knowing all those things is what gives the drabble its depth.

If someone is able to take a prompt or an idea and take it to a really unique place, or to write about something you wouldn't expect from that prompt, I am totally enthralled.
Uch a great point! And one I really appreciate as an author. Somehow the restriction of the word count give you the freedom to play around with the meanings of the prompts. Or maybe it's just where my mind goes. Give me a sexy prompt and I write angst, give me an angsty prompt and I write humor. Somehow I always struggle with the simpliest interpretations of the prompts and find it easier to do something unexpected. It's nice to know someone appreciates that instead of just thinking I'm strange:)

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[info]fun_demented
2009-05-23 02:21 pm UTC (link)
I don't have a preference for any fan creations; whether they be drabbles, WIPs, icons, vids, banners, meta, Tweak says--each individual genre of expression can in itself, but good or bad. My judgments are based on technical and artistic merit, but it's all subjective to me and what I am seeking.

I think in the non-fandom world, a drabble would purely a story best expressed in 100 words. This is called flash fiction. A genre that's gaining more attention and popularity recently. In the greater world the formula would be to set the reader up for the "punch". This could be a punchline or a twist or a reveal.

But it would be a story where all you really want to express to the reader is what happens during the "punch".

For example: A husband wants to hire a hitman. The person who he finds is female. The flash fiction begins when he's talking to the hitwoman and givening her the gun to use. He says, "Who would have thought of hiring a female hitman?"

The female hit"man" takes the gun, cocks it and points it at him and say, "Your wife."

In fandom, we share so much backstory that the set up is not as important in oder to make a good "punch" at the end, but it's necessary.

But this isn't the only purpose in writing and reading a drabble. In fandom we're here because we want MORE of Queer as Folk. So a good drabble, as well as a good full-lenght or chaptered story is gong to give us that. The criteria we use to judge is going to be based on whether we fill like we got more of QAF. We won't like it if we think it's OOC. We won't like it if we don't get the inside references, etc. And we won't be satisfied if there wasn't a good full circle of meaning. So we may like the writing but we'll be left wanting more.

This is were it gets confusing. We might want more because WE ALWLAYS WANT MORE. That's why we're here in the first place: we can't get enough of this show and it's characters.

We also have created our own QAF fan-culture. So we not only need to agree upon canon, but fanon. Something's will resinate, sparking biases. For example: I love Michael, but he's someone I might want to make the butt of a joke, because he's an easy target and that's part of his charm (his flaws and stuff), but I won't do that, because I know that there's Mhchael haters out there and DO NOT want to be mistook for one, or even satisfy they're hatred, I LOVE MIKEY.

So, it's just more complicated, because what we want is QAF more than even a good story or good drabble. That's the bottom line.

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[info]happier_bunny
2009-05-23 04:14 pm UTC (link)
You are a genius. I must say that when [info]faile02 first brought up the idea of [info]qaf_drabbles, I wasn't sure because I never understood the purpose of drabbles, but I came to love them.

I love when an author can express so much in such a few words. It almost feels powerful the few times I feel like I nailed it. ;)

I definitely feel the connection you're talking about. Knowing canon, brings so much to a drabble. You've said it best.

As for fave drabbles. I've a ton of them and no time to list them, but I highly rec any of your drabbles, Noteverything's Xie's, and many of Vamphiles. :D

Oh, what don't you get about teh love?

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[info]_alicesprings
2009-05-23 09:12 pm UTC (link)
By necessity, drabbles require a bit of short hand. One hundred words leave little room for explanations or backstory.

ITA.

Do you appreciate how only a few tiny details can place you completely in a character’s head?

I certainly do. That's one of the great things about the 100-word limit - achieving that intimacy in so few words.

What are some of my favourite drabbles? I've found a few and I'm only going to list standalone drabbles, because while there are some fantastic drabble series, which I love a lot, I guess when it comes down to it, I think a drabble really should stand on it's own. I didn't realise I thought that until I had pick some favourites. Huh.

It was hard to narrow it down, and there are several others by these writers (and a bunch more) I love, but here's just a few.

Okay, at the top of my list of all-time faves is this one by Ny. Hilarious, IC, not a word of dialogue but it says it all!
http://asylums.insanejournal.com/qaf_drabbles/59492.html

This one by Jule cracks me up, and I love me some Ted!
http://asylums.insanejournal.com/qaf_drabbles/366892.html

Another one by Jule. AWESOME ensemble drabble. Fucking perfect drabble IMO.
http://asylums.insanejournal.com/qaf_drabbles/499592.html

A gorgeous, atmospheric, sensual drabble from Tweeds.
http://asylums.insanejournal.com/qaf_drabbles/384603.html

This one by Xie. *happy, happy sigh*
http://asylums.insanejournal.com/qaf_drabbles/136233.html

Justin drabble by britin1729. Love me some ballsy season 1 Justin.
http://asylums.insanejournal.com/qaf_drabbles/595421.html

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[info]merkuria
2009-05-24 03:52 am UTC (link)
What I like most about drabbles is their "distilled" character, how stripped of all unnecessary words they are, how basic, in a good sense.

When I start reading a drabble I expect to have a "Yes. That." reaction, that's my test for whether a drabble is successful. Needless to say, it is not always so.

One of my favourite drabbles is here (WARNING: death drabble): http://flashfly.livejournal.com/50664.html

and another, this a s1 one:
http://lookingglass.thelightgetsin.com/laughing.html


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