This was really well done. First of all it was hot as hell. Lots of anticipation and pent up desire. I drooled through quite a bit of it!
This was one of my favorite parts:
"Hey," he huffed out, his voice betraying the excitement he felt at being so close to Brian.
Hooking his finger into the top of the tee shirt Justin was wearing he leaned in, eyebrow raised in a question.
"Is that my shirt you’re wearing?"
"Yeah," Justin replied breathlessly as he looked up into Brian’s eyes.
"I thought so. It looks a little big on you, don’t you think?"
Justin pressed even closer to Brian, his breath warm on Brian’s face as he practically purred, "Want it back?"
Brian felt a jolt go through his body.
"Loft. Midnight." Brian said, as he let go of the shirt and turned back to the cash register. He paid the bill and left, never once looking back at Justin who stood there with a huge grin on his face and his heart thumping in his chest.
Flirty, sexy Justin, and Brian playing right along. It’s a thing of beauty and you did it so wonderfully.
This was a really well-done look at S1 confident Justin. The t-shirt angle was a great idea, and the ending made me go Awww. I had a lot of fun reading this! So glad you participated. :)