Aww, I loved this. It's always good to see Neville fics and you do Neville fics justice. He's especially cute with Bill.
I'm giggling here at Bill because of his jealousy towards Charlie. Even though he knows Neville loves him, he can't help but get all protective when Charlie is near his Neville. As if Charlie knew they were talking about him, he turned towards them just as he opened the kitchen door, and blew Neville a kiss. Too cute. <3 I love bad boy Charlie.
Ooo, Kingsley made an appearance. I like Kingsley. Heh, nice of Bill to set Charlie up with Kingsley.