EEEEEEEEEE okay, I'm just halfway through but I had to pause and give some feedback before I forget things.
First off - loving it!! So much! And now to switch to pointform: 1) Draco's voice. It is so strong and so agreeable to me, like. I love how you've written him - not too complex or smarty-pants, but definitely cunning and wonderfully wry. Or perhaps cynical? I like the idea of cynical!Draco in post-war, very much. 2) YAY HARRY IS SHORTER THAN DRACO. *cough* Moving on-- 3) AHAHAH OH SNAPE. For some reason, I keep imagining him some some sort of insane parallel to Molly for the Weasley kids, like. He's so...matronly with Draco; is both endearing and pleasant, since now his portrait can relax and show his true self with his fellow Slytherins. 4) The whole debate of school houses, in fact. I love how Harry's so against the idea and Draco's so like 'bzuh? Wtf is wrong with you?' Very clever! 5) OH MCGONAGALL!! Goodness, I loved their little interaction with her at Hogwarts! So so very adorable! 6) OK, this line: Potter tugged his t-shirt down, covering the strip of flesh between its hem and the waistband of his jeans. HEE. BECAUSE YES. 7) Oh have to say (now that I'm drooling over the scene with them eating stew and scones OMG SO HUNGRY) is that if there's one thing I look for in H/D fics, it good, strong, steady banter. I love when Harry and Draco banter, they are the perfect balances for each other in that respect. And I'm really enjoying it in this! Their insults are witty and delightfully casual and familiar. Yum. 8)...oh what, sorry? Sex. Hot. Yes. Got distracted. *HEE*
AND PILLOW TALK AFTER OMG THEY ARE SO GOOSHY AND CUTE. NAWWW! Thank you so much!!