I have been slayed by you, "mystery author"! Incredible work! Your story is brilliant, vividly detailed, funny, sexy as all hell - the grandest perfection. I love the way you've written it, with Fleur as the cool and keen narrator/observer. She has such a strong, original voice, clever and assertive - I love how she confronts the reader and weaves her own thoughts into the narrative.
I adore everything. The irresistible premise: Snape/Lupin/Bill, with Fleur as voyeur. The gorgeous characterizations of the boys, Fleur's awesome personality. Bill's desperate lust for Lupin. Lupin's intense love for Snape. The hottest sex scene which takes place in the headmaster's office, that I've ever read - and it's Snape/Lupin! Then Lupin convincing Snape to participate in a threesome. The mind-blowing sex between Snape and Lupin and Bill! And the kinks, OMFG, you killed me with the kinks!
I explode with joyous squees and manic giggling. You are too brilliant for words! I love and envy the way you slay me with your fic. Karasu is soo lucky!