(Here, by way of Glockgal's great art post for this story :))
You did a fantastic job in setting the mood/premise for this story. Ron's befuddlement and sense of being at a loss (in his life, not just in a strange, exotic land) really came across in the early sections of the story. I wish we found out how Draco ended up in Korea, but I understand and appreciate that this story is all about Ron's pov -- a fantastic series of impressions of this almost dream-like stay in Seoul, which might just change his view of the world, and of himself, a bit :)
(I love stories set in Exotic Locations btw. I've never been to Seoul but have flown through Inchong airport a few times, and I adore Korean food -- you've made me want to fit in a stopover next time!)