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The Bad
The bad ...
From my early days of fanfic ... almost a whole year ago ;-)
As part of the then hd_boardgame, both of these "tie" as the bad.
The first is an angst drabble ... looking back why would Draco have looked at Harry in disgust? Snape wouldn't have let Malfoy just walk out. It's just not a well written drabble, plain and simple.
The Bad #1
Angst Drabble (theme touch) words: hurt, faithless
After 7 years, Harry was going to be inside Draco Malfoy. He needed to feel, needed to touch, needed to connect on the most basic of all levels. Then Snape had walked in. The moment was lost. Malfoy magicked his clothes back on, gave Harry a look of utter disgust, then ran out of the potions classroom. Harry sat on the desk naked, hurt, faithless.
After 7 years, Harry was going to be inside Draco Malfoy. He needed to feel, needed to touch, needed to connect on the most basic of all levels. Then Snape had walked in. The moment was lost. Malfoy magicked his clothes back on, gave Harry a look of utter disgust, then ran out of the potions classroom. Harry sat on the desk naked, hurt, faithless.
The Bad #2
Limerick (really sad attempt at a limerick. It doesn't really follow the limerick rules, feels forced)
There once was a boy with eyes of grey,
When he woke his sheets were in disarray,
He turned over and smiled,
His green eyed lover quite wild,
They connected and started round 2 without delay.
There once was a boy with eyes of grey,
When he woke his sheets were in disarray,
He turned over and smiled,
His green eyed lover quite wild,
They connected and started round 2 without delay.