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Mods of Kiseki RPG (kiseki_mods) wrote in kiseki_rpg,
@ 2009-09-07 00:56:00

Current mood:	bored
Entry tags:	concrit meme, important shit, meme, mod post, ooc

Concrit meme - Take 15!
We're having a concrit meme again! The rules are the same as last time:

Comment to this post with a list of your characters.

Then reply anonymously to the other players, giving concrit on how they're playing/their characterization/their interactions/etc. Or ask them stuff, like why did chara A did this or say that or w/e.

Flame anyone, and I'll kill you in the face. I'm looking for something that can help us improve, not for someone to go 'OMG YOU SUCK!!11!' at someone else. If you really do believe someone's screwing up, then be civil, and explain why you feel that way.

You can just praise a character, if you can't find anything wrong with what they do. It's always better if you can elaborate on why you like that character, but hey, flailing at someone is fine too.

This is semi-mandatory! If you really, really can't take concrit, then go ahead and don't participate, but I'd rather everyone did.

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	nantokanaruyo 2009-09-07 04:01 am UTC (link)
	Sakura (nantokanaruyo) Cloney (kanarazu) Paparan (kienaide) tiny Real (unmeinohito) Fay (feartobelieve) Mokona (travelsized) Doumeki (manofmanyfaces) Sei (bokuwakimiwo) Kusa (treetrunkthighs) Kakyou (bawwwww) (Reply to this) (Thread)

(Anonymous)
2009-09-07 06:35 pm UTC (link)

I don't feel that the many Syaorans are a problem per se, but I'd wish that you wouldn't switch back and forth between big and tiny Real as much. It sometimes makes building CR with them difficult, especially for non-canonmates of theirs.

All your characters are great though, and kudos for keeping all of the Syaos' voices distinct. Mokona is absolutely delightful, and your Kusa is great, even if I know you worry about him.

	(Anonymous) 2009-09-07 08:36 pm UTC (link)
	I think you're doing a good job with Fay, considering he keeps getting massively spoiled being here with all his later canonmates. His discomfort comes through very strongly (even when he's trying to hide it.) I know it's hard with so many characters, but it'd still be great to see more of him. And tiny real is adorable. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	anewfight 2009-09-07 04:03 am UTC (link)
	Kurogane \| anewfight Chii \| totalcockblock Subaru \| hidesinhats Aside from tag moar? I suck lately anyway AND I'M PARANOID ABOUT ALL OF THEM. and yeaaaaaaah. orz. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	(Anonymous) 2009-09-07 12:24 pm UTC (link)
	I was rereading some of Chii's threads earlier and dear lord is she adorable. You do an excellent job of her. Just saying. orz (Reply to this) (Parent)

	minininja 2009-09-07 04:03 am UTC (link)
	Fuuma // n__n Himawari // unluckyflower Kurogane (young) // minininja Sakura (clone/post-death) // mataaerumade Syaoran (tiny clone) // littlewanwan Yuzuriha // littlepuppylove --- Uhhhh idk nothing really specifically this time around, though I'm still stupidly paranoid over cloney. :\|a;; (Reply to this) (Thread)