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Mods of Kiseki RPG (kiseki_mods) wrote in kiseki_rpg,
@ 2009-08-07 14:21:00

Current mood:	bored
Entry tags:	cannot stick to a set date, concrit meme, important shit, meme, mod post, ooc

Concrit meme - Take 14!
We're having a concrit meme again! The rules are the same as last time:

Comment to this post with a list of your characters.

Then reply anonymously to the other players, giving concrit on how they're playing/their characterization/their interactions/etc. Or ask them stuff, like why did chara A did this or say that or w/e.

Flame anyone, and I'll kill you in the face. I'm looking for something that can help us improve, not for someone to go 'OMG YOU SUCK!!11!' at someone else. If you really do believe someone's screwing up, then be civil, and explain why you feel that way.

You can just praise a character, if you can't find anything wrong with what they do. It's always better if you can elaborate on why you like that character, but hey, flailing at someone is fine too.

This is semi-mandatory! If you really, really can't take concrit, then go ahead and don't participate, but I'd rather everyone did.

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anewfight
2009-08-07 05:24 pm UTC (link)

Chii |

totalcockblock
Clow!Kurogane |

anewfight

Derp. I'm definitely still trying to get my bearings with Chii. And trying to find a balance of cute and curious without making her just seem like a complete idiot. And for Kuro... well. I'm trying to work on the things pointed out in the past. Even though I feel like I go from fixing one thing to backtracking on another and making him too... flat or something

idk idk. :|

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	(Anonymous) 2009-08-07 07:01 pm UTC (link)
	I think you're doing great with Chii. She's just adorable, and I think you're managing to do exactly what you mentioned; making her cute and curious without having her sound dumb. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	(Anonymous) 2009-08-07 07:06 pm UTC (link)
	Kurogane needs to stop saying "Oi" every two words. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	nantokanaruyo 2009-08-07 05:24 pm UTC (link)
	CCS!Sakura (nantokanaruyo) Real!Syao (fukutsunokokoro) <= needs to tag moar! Working on that right now ;;; C!Syao (kanarazu) <= same as with Real Papa! Syao (kienaide) Syaoron (little_dragon) Fay (feartobelieve) Doumeki (manofmanyfaces) Dead! Sei (bokuwakimiwo) Kakyou (bawwwww) Kusa (treetrunkthighs) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	(Anonymous) 2009-08-07 07:38 pm UTC (link)
	YOU ALREADY COVERED THIS but I'd love to see Cloney and Realthing around more. /what is anon (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	(Anonymous) 2009-08-07 07:40 pm UTC (link)
	this isn't really crit but I really do love all your different Syaos. They all have a distinct voice while still sounding like Syaoran (and Syaoron) should. but if you app another one, we'll have to maim you. ALSO MORE KUSA HE'S AMAZING. :D (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)