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Mods of Kiseki RPG (kiseki_mods) wrote in kiseki_rpg,
@ 2009-06-10 05:29:00

Current mood:	bored
Entry tags:	cannot stick to a set date, concrit meme, important shit, meme, mod post, ooc

Concrit meme - Take 12!
We're having a concrit meme again! The rules are the same as last time:

Comment to this post with a list of your characters.

Then reply ANONYMOUSLY to the other players, giving concrit on how they're playing/their characterization/their interactions/etc. Or ask them stuff, like why did chara A did this or say that or w/e.

Flame anyone, and I'll kill you in the face. I'm looking for something that can be positive to the game and can help us ALL improve. Not for someone to go 'OMG YOU SUCK' at someone else. Not that I expect that to happen, but I'm just making sure.

You can just praise a character, if you can't find anything wrong with what they do. If you can elaborate on WHY you like that character, it'd be better, but hey, I won't mind if you can't do anything but keyboard smash at someone's awesome.

This is semi-mandatory! If you really, really can't take concrit, then go ahead and don't participate, but I'd rather everyone did.

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(Anonymous)
2009-06-13 01:33 pm UTC (link)

Okay, I guess some of these could be considered nitpicky, or I could be completely off, but I wanted to try and give crit, so:

- little real is adorable, but sometimes I feel like he's almost too grumpy? Like, it's hard to interact with sometimes, because I know he wants to leave Kiseki and maybe it's just because he doesn't interact a lot, but it seems like he's only approachable by the Sakuras.

- I love Fay, and I'm glad to see that he's commenting more recently. I know having a lot of characters must mean its hard to comment with everyone, but it'd be great to see him being more sociable with non-TRC characters.

- Same for Subaru, it'd be great to see more of him.

- I guess I'll just repeat what an anony said last crit meme in that it'd be great to see more teasing and shenanigans from Mokona(s).

Other than that, and all of those are barely helpful at all, your characters are so much fun! Sakura is adorable, as always. And I'm really impressed that you've been managing to have Kakyou talk to so many people.

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feartobelieve
2009-06-13 05:40 pm UTC (link)

That's fine, I'm a nitpicky freak |D; So I don't mind at all.

- Y-yes, that's basically why he's grumpy. Kiseki just sucks. You have to consider that he spends time in the library every day trying to find a way to remove Sakura's seal. And he keeps finding no answer, and even if he did he'd probably forget it. Nevermind that the TRC cast is full of angst and brain-breaking and he doesn't get any answers from them, either. And he's not matured enough to be able to just "n_n" at things like his older self did (/does/will do/trc's timelines are crazy), so it turns into grumpyness? I might've been over-doing it, though ;; B-but I'm pretty much decided on dropping him by now, so I suppose it doesn't matter anymore.

- Ahahaha, I'm sort of perpetually working on having Fay reply more. I can at least say I'm aware of the issue? I promise I'm not just like "oh lol it's fine if he just talks to two people \o/".

- I'll work on Subaru, too :3 I really do need to have him talk to more people. He's been quiet lately because I was in a thread that was sort of relevant for him? I wasn't sure where it'd go so I kind of kept him low-profile for a while.

- ... I agree :| I need to plot moar with him.

Thank you! And don't worry, it IS helpful o/ I'm actually really happy about your comment ;;

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