Okay, I guess some of these could be considered nitpicky, or I could be completely off, but I wanted to try and give crit, so:

- little real is adorable, but sometimes I feel like he's almost too grumpy? Like, it's hard to interact with sometimes, because I know he wants to leave Kiseki and maybe it's just because he doesn't interact a lot, but it seems like he's only approachable by the Sakuras.

- I love Fay, and I'm glad to see that he's commenting more recently. I know having a lot of characters must mean its hard to comment with everyone, but it'd be great to see him being more sociable with non-TRC characters.

- Same for Subaru, it'd be great to see more of him.

- I guess I'll just repeat what an anony said last crit meme in that it'd be great to see more teasing and shenanigans from Mokona(s).



Other than that, and all of those are barely helpful at all, your characters are so much fun! Sakura is adorable, as always. And I'm really impressed that you've been managing to have Kakyou talk to so many people.