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Mods of Kiseki RPG (kiseki_mods) wrote in kiseki_rpg,
@ 2009-06-10 05:29:00

Current mood:	bored
Entry tags:	cannot stick to a set date, concrit meme, important shit, meme, mod post, ooc

Concrit meme - Take 12!
We're having a concrit meme again! The rules are the same as last time:

Comment to this post with a list of your characters.

Then reply ANONYMOUSLY to the other players, giving concrit on how they're playing/their characterization/their interactions/etc. Or ask them stuff, like why did chara A did this or say that or w/e.

Flame anyone, and I'll kill you in the face. I'm looking for something that can be positive to the game and can help us ALL improve. Not for someone to go 'OMG YOU SUCK' at someone else. Not that I expect that to happen, but I'm just making sure.

You can just praise a character, if you can't find anything wrong with what they do. If you can elaborate on WHY you like that character, it'd be better, but hey, I won't mind if you can't do anything but keyboard smash at someone's awesome.

This is semi-mandatory! If you really, really can't take concrit, then go ahead and don't participate, but I'd rather everyone did.

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	nantokanaruyo 2009-06-10 03:33 am UTC (link)
	CCS! Sakura (nantokanaruyo) C!Syaoran (kanarazu) R!Syaoran (fukutsunokokoro) (currently on hiatus for a canon update) Little R!Syaoran (unmeinohito) Fay (feartobelieve) Subaru (lost_blood) Doumeki (manofmanyfaces) Mokona (sealingblue) Dead!Seishirou (bokuwakimiwo) Kakyou (bawwwww) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	(Anonymous) 2009-06-10 03:39 am UTC (link)
	I love them all~! Sakura especially, but all of them~! is helpful (Reply to this) (Parent)

(Anonymous)
2009-06-13 01:33 pm UTC (link)

Okay, I guess some of these could be considered nitpicky, or I could be completely off, but I wanted to try and give crit, so:

- little real is adorable, but sometimes I feel like he's almost too grumpy? Like, it's hard to interact with sometimes, because I know he wants to leave Kiseki and maybe it's just because he doesn't interact a lot, but it seems like he's only approachable by the Sakuras.

- I love Fay, and I'm glad to see that he's commenting more recently. I know having a lot of characters must mean its hard to comment with everyone, but it'd be great to see him being more sociable with non-TRC characters.

- Same for Subaru, it'd be great to see more of him.

- I guess I'll just repeat what an anony said last crit meme in that it'd be great to see more teasing and shenanigans from Mokona(s).

Other than that, and all of those are barely helpful at all, your characters are so much fun! Sakura is adorable, as always. And I'm really impressed that you've been managing to have Kakyou talk to so many people.

	fightforjustice 2009-06-10 03:38 am UTC (link)
	Chun Hyang [fightforjustice] Horitsuba!Fai [chemistryislove] I know I haven't done much with Fai lately but I'm planning on fixing that soon, since my exams are almost done. I'm mainly concerned for Chun Hyang though (because I'm paranoid). (Reply to this) (Thread)

	(Anonymous) 2009-06-10 01:52 pm UTC (link)
	I think you're doing wonderful with both her and Fai! Also seconding what the other anon said about how well you're handling her feelings about her mother's recent death. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	iamjustice 2009-06-10 06:57 am UTC (link)
	Oh dear, it's time for one of these again? Time flies! little_piggy Ashura unholy_prophet Kujaku iamjustice Mong Ryong (Reply to this) (Thread)

	kuroninja 2009-06-10 09:22 am UTC (link)
	kuroninja Kurogane raaawr Ioryogi (who WILL be posting soon OTL) iseedeadspirits Watanuki emeraldwind Fuu sintolive Yuui (Reply to this) (Thread)