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WriterZilch ([info]writerzilch) wrote in [info]kinkfest,
@ 2007-09-24 21:57:00

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Current mood: tummy hurty
Entry tags:a: writerzilch, f: ouran host club, p: hikaru/kaoru, september 24

[fic] "Ritualistic", Ouran Highschool Host Club (Hikaru/Kaoru)
Geh, what a day. Sorry I'm posting this so late.

Title: Ritualistic
Author: [info]writerzilch
Rating: PG-13 for implied sex
Warnings: Twincest.
Summary: "Everyone has their rituals, Kaoru. This is just a different way of praying."
A/N: Written in an odd style.



"The light, Kaoru, get the--"

"I'm getting it, I'm getting it, keep your pants on..."

"Isn't the point the fact that I'm taking them off?"

Click.

"Here, Hikaru, let me help you with that."

"I'm not sitting on the bed yet. Wait till I'm sitting on the bed!"

Ziiiip.

"Okay, Kaoru, now your shirt. Lift your arms--"

"Yours next."

"No, no, then it wouldn't be right. You undress and then I undress. That's how it always goes."

Rustle.

"...Are you ready, Kaoru?"

"I'm holding my side of the covers."

"Alright then. We get under the covers on three. One, two--"

Creaksqueak.

"...Is that your knee, Kaoru, or are you just happy to see me?"

"You say that every night. Jerk."

"You'd be sad if I didn't say it. Poor Kaoru."

"I guess it would be strange. Hey, Hikaru...?"

"Mm?"

"Is it really a good thing? To be so bound by habit, I mean."

Slide.

Rustle.


"Everyone has their rituals, Kaoru. This is just a different way of praying."

Rustle.

Creak. Creak. Creak.

Moan.



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[info]letyourheartwin
2007-09-25 03:11 am UTC (link)
"Everyone has their rituals, Kaoru. This is just a different way of praying."

This is one of the most well written lines I've read in a while! I adore the simple style, though it speaks volumes!

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[info]writerzilch
2007-09-25 03:26 am UTC (link)
Aheh, that was mostly the prompt-line, so I really can't take credit for its cleverness. (Prompt: Ouran High School Host Club, Hikaru/Kaoru: Rituals - It was just a different kind of praying.)

I'm glad you enjoyed the fic! Thank you. ^^

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[info]kemis
2007-09-25 02:56 pm UTC (link)
Love it. I adore the unseen actions and the surreal quality they give to the fic. *waves the Happy Recipient flag*

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